An Unjust World, Part 4 Finale (fluffysan)

Another few bright-times came and went after your discovery of your pretty purple mane, going largely the same as before. Mummah, Bestest, and Green babbeh give you poopies, usually directly onto you, and you would give them lickie-cleanies. Daddeh would do poopies off to the side of you, at least, though even he would sometimes ask you to clean him as well. At least he always asked you nicely, even if it still made you sad anyways.

You thought you had gotten really good at cleaning the poopies off of your family’s rears, but Green babbeh still hits you as hard as he can, usually in the face, even if you do a good job. You’re almost as scared of him as you are of Mummah at this point!

You still get heart-hurties whenever Red babbeh ignores you now. He’s always crying whenever he comes to make poopies, before running away as fast as he can to go get huggies to help him cope with his guilt. You’ve stopped trying to convince him that you forgive him at this point, and usually just lay there in the poopie pile, watching him sadly. He just cries harder whenever you try to talk to him now, anyways.

But even with this abuse, you still try to keep the image of your purple mane in your thinkie-place at all times, always giving you a small bit of joy. The thought anchors you, gives you some sort of purpose. You have to keep existing, if only for your purple mane.

It was…really all you thought about, anymore. Never daring to leave the poopie pile again, you spend most of the bright-times staring off into space, thinking about it, day-dreaming about what it might look like if you didn’t live your whole life covered in poopies. You honestly couldn’t even comprehend how pretty it might be in that case. So pretty, so purple, so…

“Take poopies, dummeh poopie babbeh! Gween babbeh hatechu! Hnn, gud poopies!”

It was from one of these day-dreams that you were rudely interrupted, a fresh heap of slimy filth splattering your face, causing you to cry.

“Huuhuu! Wai Gween babbeh su meansies? Am onwy wittow babbeh!”

A hoofsie smacks across your cheek, sending stinging pain throughout you. Why’d it have to be Green babbeh again? Why?

“Shaddup, dummeh! Gween babbeh gud babbeh! Poopie babbeh nu git wuv ow happies! Onwy saddies an’ wowstes’ huwties! Cuz, cuz am dummeh poopie! Dummeh! Gween hatechu!”

Tears well up in your one good see-place, the other one still swollen shut, as your lip quivers. Every time Green babbeh smacks you, he turns around and looks over at Mummah, over there giving big huggies to Bestest, pampering and cooing to her favorite babbeh. Every time he looks back at you, he looks even angrier.

“Mummah! Mummah! Wook! Gween babbeh gib dummeh babbeh huwties! Am gud babbeh! Wook!”

Another sorry-hoofsie slaps across your face, Green babbeh not even caring that he’s getting his own poopies smeared across his leggies. All his attention is on Mummah, who continues to ignore him

“Huuhuu! Owwies! Huwties…”

You lower your head, covering it with your one good leggie, hoping to lessen the blows from your brother’s daily onslaught.

“W-wai…poopie babbeh nu unnastan…Mummah nu gib poopie babbeh huwties when mummah gu poopies, onwy gib meanie wowdsies…Gween babbeh gib huwties tu babbeh ebewy timesie…Gween babbeh meanie babbeh…”

A look of pure rage flashes across Green’s tiny, fluffy face. Oh no, you should not have said that.

“Gween babbeh nu! Am! Meanie! Gud babbeh, am gud babbeh! Huu, Mummah! Wook! Am gud babbeh!”

Every time Green brother squeaks out that he’s a good babbeh, another sorry hoofsie lands on top of you, wracking your frail body with pain. Green babbeh wails his hoofsies down onto you, tears of pure rage pouring down his face, interrupted only by his constant looks back over to Mummah…this is one of the worst beatings he’s ever given you! Why? What did you do to him? Panic begins to set in as you begin to see stars, the blows not stopping…

“Am! Gud! Babbeh! Am! Gud! Babbeh! Poopie babbeh am BAD babbeh! Mummah, woooook! Wook at Gween babbeh! Huuhuuuu, pweese wook! Mummahhh!”

You huu-huu loudly, hoping, praying to your pretty purple mane that something, anything makes your brother stop. Boo-boo juice runs out of your nosie, your ears are ringing so loudly, you can’t concentrate…please…you can just barely see Daddeh Cliff off in the distance, playing with Red babbeh, completely oblivious to the vicious beating you’re currently receiving…you desperately reach a hoofie out to them…

“Daddeh…huu, su many owwies! Sabe babbeh…”

Then, the assault suddenly stops. You hesitantly open up your see-place, watching as Green babbeh stands transfixed, staring back over at Mummah, drooling. Mummah has finished playing with Bestest, and is letting her latch onto one of her milkie places.

“M-miwkies! Mummah! Gween babbeh comin’! Wait fow Gween babbeh, mummah! Huuhuu! Am bestes’ babbeh tuuhuuhuu!”

And just like that, you are again forgotten in the muck by everyone. You shudder, barely able to move, your body feeling so not pretty. You wish you could know why Green brother hates you so much. At least your mane still is a small bit of comfort…

“Huu…poopie babbeh hab p-pwetty manesie…huuhuu, pwetty manesie wuv babbeh…babbeh wuv manesie…gwow big an’ pwetty…”

As you quietly sing to yourself to distract from the pain, the faint smell of milkies wafts over to you. You don’t want to, you really don’t, but you can’t help let your see-place wander, looking over at your family. You try to keep focusing on your mane, but you can’t help but be reminded once again of just how awful the poopie pile can be, and of just how horribly hungry you always are.

You see Mummah cooing, petting Bestest’s pretty peach mane as she suckles down as much milk as she can, her already fat body seeming to grow even more. She unlatches with a burp before moving over to the next milkie-place, beginning to guzzle down the rest of the milkies, snorting and huffing in air without stopping her feast. It’s absolutely impressive how many milkies she can drink, and you can’t help but start crying again, wishing that it were you…if only Mummah could see your purple mane…you’d be bestest then, you just know it.

“Mummahhh! Huuhuu! Gween babbeh wan’ miwkies tu! Am gud babbeh!”

“Nu Gween babbeh, Mummah gib Bestes’ - “

“Mummah! Wed babbeh hewe! Wook, am dancie babbeh! Gib miwkies an’ wuv?”

Mummah’s attention snaps away from Green babbeh, as she coos in delight at Red babbeh’s dance, clapping her hoofsies together with a big smile on her face.

“Teehee, Mummah wuv Wed babbeh’s dancie! Bu’ Wed an’ Gween babbeh aweady hab miwkies at wakey-timesie. Bestes’ babbeh nee’ mowe, cuz Bestes’ am bestes’. Mummah gib huggies an’ wuv, bu’ nu mowe miwkies tiww dawk-timesie.”

Looking down, Red babbeh sniffles, some tears falling to the floor.

sniffle “Huu…otay Mummah…Wed gu pway wif Daddeh Cwiff…”

Red babbeh dejectedly waddles away, towards your Daddeh, who seems like he’s looking off at something by the fencie, concern on his face. What is he…?

“HUUHUU! Mummah, Gween babbeh nee’ miwkies and wuv, NAOW! NAOW! MUMMAH!”

Even your Mummah is startled by Green babbeh’s outburst, as is Bestest, who lets out a stream of milky scaredy-poopies as she starts sobbing from the loud noises. For the first time, you see Mummah actually angry at a babbeh other than you, as she turns around and gives Green babbeh a not too gentle sorry-hoofsie.

“Gween babbeh NU make woud-tawkies at Mummah! Gween babbeh scawe Bestes’! If Gween babbeh be bad babbeh, den NU git miwkies at dawk-timesie!”

Other than yourself, you’ve never seen a babbeh so broken as Green babbeh at this moment. Sobbing, Green babbeh sits on his rump, desperately waving his front leggies around.

“Huu! Chirp! Huuhuu! W-wook, huu! Am dancie babbeh! Am…am gud babbeh! Am bestes’! Dancie, dancie! Huuhuu, Mummahhhh!”

“Gween babbeh make Mummah an’ Bestes’ nu smeww pwetty! Nee’ gu git poopie babbeh tu cwean up Bestes’ babbeh’s scawedy-poopies, naow! Ow nu miwkies!”

“Nuuu! NUUU! Mummahhh! Nee’ miwkies an’ wuv NAOW!”

Green babbeh drops to his belly, shuts his see-places tight, and starts fiercely tapping all four of his hoofies against the ground in an unprecedented tantrum, screaming and crying hysterically at his rejection. Even though he had just spent several minutes beating you down into your mushy nestie, you actually feel bad for Green babbeh. You know the feeling, and he’s still your brother. You can’t help but let out a soft huu-huu at how saddies he is. No babbeh should be sad.

Then, a moment later, you hear your Daddeh scream…and then everything in your life changes.

“SPECHUW FWIEND! M-MUNSTAH! KITTEH-MUNSTAH! WUN TU NESTIE HOWE!”

Save for Green babbeh, too busy throwing his tantrum, every one of you turn your heads towards the fencie. On top of it, looking down at all of you, is a strange creature, kinda like a big fluffy, but less…fluffy. Jet-black fluff covers it, and big, green see-places watch your family. It’s kind of pretty, in a weird, terrifying way.

Everything seems to happen at once, but you see a bit of all of it, all with Green babbeh’s screams of anger and sorrow echoing around. Daddeh Cliff and Red babbeh both run past Mummah and the others, bolting for the nestie hole.

“Huuhuu! Nu huwt Daddeh Cwiff ow Spechuw Fwiend ow babbehs, nice kitteh-munstah! Nu wan!”

“Spechuw fwiend! Nu weave Mummah! Huuhuuuu! Nu weave Bestes’! Screee! Kitteh-munstah comin’! Hewe, Bestes’!”

Your Mummah reaches down and, with a loud grunt of exertion, manages to heft Bestest babbeh up and onto her back, not even caring that Bestest is soiling both of them with more scaredy-poopies. Mummah is making plenty of scaredy-poopies too, after all. The munstah leaps down from the fencie, landing nearby, before crouching down and inching closer. Mummah turns around and starts trundling to the nestie hole…

“Nee’ miwkies! Nee’ miwkies! NEE’ MIWKIES!”

…not even noticing Green babbeh, eyes shut tight, ignoring everything and still screaming right beside her. She bowls him over onto his side, one of Mummah’s hoofsies accidentally crushing down on one of Green’s own as she flees with Bestest, a sickening crunch emanating from it.

“SCREEE! WOWSTES’ WEGGIE HUWTIES! Wai, Mummah? Huu, Mummah nu wuv babbeh nu mowe? Wowstes’ huwties, huuhuu! Nee’ huggies!”

Mummah has no time to respond as she just barely makes it to the nestie hole, squeezing inside with Bestest.

“Huu! Su many huwties! Wai Mummah huwt Gween babbeh? Nu wuv?”

Green babbeh desperately looks around, disoriented from the pain, confused as to why no fluffy or babbeh is coming to give him huggies to make him feel better. He quickly notices the reason why.

“Screee! Munstah! Mummah! Sabe babbeh!”

Green babbeh tries to get up, but as soon as he puts weight on his broken leggie, he collapses again.

“SCREEE! Weggie gib wowstes’ huwties tu gud babbeh! Nu faiw! Am gud babbeh! Wai Mummah an’ weggie nu wuv?!”

Green babbeh lays there, sobbing and screeching, as the kitteh-munstah steps closer and closer. Green babbeh aims his rear at it, trying to defend himself even in the midst of his unbearable pain.

“Huuhuu! Nu num babbeh, dummeh! Take sowwy-poopies!”

If he hadn’t just relieved himself as much as he could upon you a few minutes ago, maybe Green babbeh would have had a chance. As it is, all that escapes his rear end is a pitiful little fart.

“Poopie pwace nu wowk? Huu, meanie poopie pwace! Huuhuu, pwease mistah kitteh-munstah, nu num babbeh, am onwy wittow - SCREEE!”

You watch in horror as the monster pounces, landing atop its prey as it begins to bat Green babbeh back and forth along the hard floor, smacking him about with its not-hoofsies, claws cutting into your brother’s body. Boo-boo juice smears about, from both Green’s broken leggie and the fresh wounds opening up across his fluff.

“SCREEE! WOWSTES’ OWWIES! SCREEE! MUMMAHHH!”

You can’t watch anymore. You do what you always do to protect yourself by laying your head down, and covering your see-place with your leggie. You start wailing loudly and pooping in terror too, for good measure.

Scream after scream echoes out, your brother babbling for mercy from the animal that is merely playing with its prey before completing the hunt. Off over at the nestie hole, you can hear your family screaming and crying as well.

“Huuhuu, Gween babbeh hab wowstes’ huwties! Spechuw fwiend Cwiff, gu sabe babbeh! Mummah nu wan meanie munstah num babbeh! Huuhuu!”

“Cwiff, C-Cwiff…Cwiff am tu scawedies! Huu! Am su sowwy Spechuw fwiend, am tu scawedies! Huuhuu! Am bad daddeh!”

“SCREEE! SCREEEE! MUMMAH! BIGGES’ HUWTIES! SCREEE!”

“DUMMEH SPECHUW FWIEND, SABE BABBEH! HUUHUU, GWEEN BABBEH!”

“Nuuu! Nu wan, nu wan! Tu scawedies! Wed babbeh, pwease sabe Gween babbeh fow daddeh!”

“Nuuhuuhuu! Am onwy wittow babbeh!”

You hear a particularly powerful smack ring out from in front of you, and you hear something slide over towards your poopie pile. You can’t help it, you open your see-place…

You see your brother, Green babbeh, covered in so many owwies and so much boo-boo juice, his breathing ragged and throat shredded from screaming, bloody slashes all over his body, as tears stream down his face. He’s staring right at you, eyes wide from pain.

huff, kaff “Poopie…poopie kaff babbeh…sabe Gween babbeh…d-dummeh…”

You start to move towards him to give him huggies, to make the hurties go away…before you realize the kitty monster is staring at you now. You freeze, making all the scaredy poopies and peepees all over yourself.

“P-pwease…pwease nice munstah, nu…nu num poopie babbeh…nu taste pwetty, am poopie…am jus’ poopie…”

The kitty monster leans in closer, its huge emerald eyes staring right into yours, its cute nosie starting to sniff…

Before it retches from the stench of you and the poopie pile, turns back around, and sinks its sharp teeth into Green babbeh’s throat. Green babbeh’s bloodshot eyes, staring straight into yours, go wide as boo-boo juices spill from his mouthie and his neck, a horrific gurgling noise coming from him. Babbehs…babbehs shouldn’t make that noise. No fluffy should.

And then, just as quick as the monster had came, it turns around, leaps up to the top of the fence with your brother in its maw, then leaps off into the field outside, running off into the distance.

You can’t stop looking at the pool of boo-boo juice in front of you, feeling numb. Your brother just took forever sleepies, didn’t he? Everything is so silent now. You lower your head back down, and cover yourself with your leggie, shivering in fear.

“Huuhuu…babbeh nu wike kitteh-munstah…bigges’ scawedies!”

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“HUUHUU! Mummah’s wittow Gween babbeh am gu ‘way! Huuu! Mummah miss Gween babbeh! Nee’ gib huggies tu make babbeh’s huwties bettah! Huuhuu!”

You wish you could cover both of your hear-places, but as it is? You have no choice but to hear the wails of grief from your whole family, tears falling from your own eyes with soft huu-huus to accompany them.

Red babbeh and Bestest babbeh are wailing and chirping off on their own, hugging each other for comfort. Daddeh Cliff is standing there, vacant eyes staring at the boo-boo juice smeared on the floor.

“Huu…Gween babbeh…Cwiff nu sabe…wai Cwiff nu sabe…am wowstes’ daddeh ebah…”

Mummah is pacing about, screaming out for her second-favorite babbeh.

“Gween babbeh! Come backsies! Mummah gib miwkies an’ wuv! Miwkies an’ wuv! Pwease! Gween babbeh nu wuv Mummah nu mowe? Huuhuu, bigges’ heawt-huwties!”

Daddeh reaches out and gives Mummah a huggie, still with a vacant stare.

“Spechuw fwiend…Cwiff am sowwy…bu’ Gween babbeh am…am nummed by munstah. Gween babbeh am…fowevah sweepies.”

“NUUUHUUHUUUU! GWEEN BABBEH AM FOWEVAH SWEEPIES! MUMMAH HAB WOWSTES’ HEAWT-HUWTIES!”

Red babbeh and Bestest cry even harder upon hearing the scary words of “forever sleepies”, while Mummah gives Daddeh a rough shove away from her.

“DUMMEH SPECHUW FWIEND! NU SABE GWEEN BABBEH! CWIFF NU WUV GWEEN BABBEH OW MUMMAH! HATECHU!”

“Nuuhuuu! Cwiff wuv, Cwiff wuv! Am su sowwies! Am bad daddeh!”

“GWEEN BABBEH FOWEVAH SWEEPIES! AWW CWIFF FAUWT! Huuhuuuu!”

Mummah paces around some more, eyes wild with anger and grief…until she catches sight of the poopie pile, the pool of blood in front of it, the stray pieces of green fluff scattered around it. And of you.

“Poopie…poopie babbeh hewe da whole timesie? Wai…WAI POOPIE BABBEH NU SABE GWEEN BABBEH? WAI? WAI?!”

Mummah begins to barrel towards you. You slump down, no will to try to crawl away or cover yourself. You already know what’s coming.

You didn’t even leave the poopie pile this time. That’s no fair.

“Poopie…poopie babbeh sowwy, Mummah. Wuv…”

“DUMMEH POOPIE BABBEH! TAKE WOWSTES’ SOWWY-HOOFSIES EBAH!”

“Spechuw fwiend! Nu! Am Cwiff’s fauwt, nu Poopie babbeh’s! Huuhuu!”

The first sorry-hoofsie smashes down on top of you, knocking the air out of you. You heave, sicky-water spewing out. You cry silently. You do deserve this, don’t you? You failed to give Green babbeh huggies to help him feel better. You failed. It’s all your fault.

“WOWSTES’ POOPIE BABBEH! NU SABE GWEEN BABBEH! WET MUNSTAH NUM GWEEN BABBEH! HATECHU HATECHU HATECHU!”

Mummah’s hoofsie comes down on your back, HARD. You hear a crunchy noise, and you can’t keep silent anymore. You screech out as the worst pain you’ve ever felt shoots out across your body. Your back leggies kick frantically, trying to escape. You…you don’t want to go forever sleepies like your Green brother! Why didn’t you try to run away? You’re so stupid!

“DUMMEH BABBEH NU MOVE! GIT SQUISHIES!”

“SCREE! MUMMAH! NUUU! NU WAN!”

Mummah’s hoof presses down harder. Another crunch, a loud pop, another bloodcurdling scream, and the feeling in your lower half goes numb, as your back leggies suddenly stop kicking around. Your tiny heart races at never before seen speeds. You throw up boo-boo juice, your throat burning. You desperately look around for your daddeh, and see him off to the side, covering his see-places and crying. You have to get his attention! It hurts so, so much, but you inhale as much as you can before you shout out to him.

“DADDEH! PWEASE SABE POOPIE BABBEH! BIGGES’ HUWTIES!”

“DUMMEH BABBEH SHADDUP! MUMMAH HATECHU! WAI MUNSTAH NU NUM POOPIE?! NU FAIW!”

Mummah holds you in place, leans down, and bites your right hear-place. A moment later…

Riiiiiip “SCREEEE! SCREEEE!”

Boo-boo juice spills down your head and face. Mummah’s pure rage and grief is taken out on you and you alone. You don’t even question it anymore. All you can do is scream your throat raw, thrashing about the parts of your body that you can still thrash. You try to kick your back leggies, but they still don’t work. Like so many other parts of you, they don’t love you anymore.

Another harsh blow to the side of the head, and you feel your mouthie break! Your tongue lolls out, boo-boo juice dripping down it. Your jaw is broken. It hurts. Everything hurts…

“MUMMAH GIB POOPIE BABBEH WOWSTES’ HUWTIES! MUMMAH GIB FOWEVAH SWEEPIES FOW NU SABE GWEEN BABBEH!”

Another hoof, speeding down towards your head. You close your see-place. This is it.

“mm-mmmah…poo-p bbab w-wuv…”

“NUUUUUUU!”

The final hoofsie never comes. You open your eye, and watch in horror as daddeh Cliff bowls into Mummah, knocking her over onto her side. You’ve…you’ve never seen your daddeh like this before! Through the haze of pain, you watch him give your Mummah sorry hoofsies!

“CWIFF NU WOSE ‘NUDDAH BABBEH! NU WOSE POOPIE BABBEH! AWW BABBEHS AM FOW HUGGIES AN’ WUV!”

“Huuhuu! Nu huwt Mummah! Mummah am gud fwuffy! Wha Mummah du wong? Wai meanie Cwiff huwt Mummah? Huu!”

Your Daddeh doesn’t hit Mummah so much as shoves her away from you, but as far as a babbeh is concerned, the unthinkable is happening. Daddeh continues to shout at Mummah, even as tears roll down his cheeks.

“Aww babbehs gud babbehs! Onwy gib huggies an’ wuv! Nebah gib fowevah sweepies! Spechuw fwiend BAD MUMMAH!”

“Huuhuu! Meanie wowds gib Mummah heawt-huwties! Mummah nu unnastan, am gud mummah! Babbehs, sabe Mummah!”

“Cwiff nu wet Spechuw fwiend huwt poopie babbeh anymowe! Cwiff - “

Suddenly, your Daddeh is cut off, startled by the feeling of Red babbeh and Bestest babbeh, smacking his rear leggies with all their babbeh might, coming heroically to Mummah’s rescue.

“Wed babbeh nu wet meanie Daddeh huwt Mummah! Huuhuu, nu huwt Mummah! Wed sabe!”

“Bestes’ babbeh sabe bestes’ Mummah! Huuhuu, nee’ mowe miwkies!”

Soft pomfs come from the impacts of your sibling’s hoofsies against daddeh’s fluff. You want to help daddeh, but all you can do is cough up boo-boo juice.

“Babbehs, Cwiff nu…nu mean tu…”

“Wed h-hatechu, Daddeh! Huuhuu! Nu huwt Mummah! Wowstes’ Daddeh!”

You’ve never seen your Daddeh so sad, so broken as he is right this moment.

“Cwiff…babbehs…Cwiff…”

Your mummah sniffles on the ground, shivering in fear.

“Huuhuu…Cwiff gib Mummah bigges’ owwies…gu ‘way, meanie fwuffy…nu am spechuw fwiend nu mowe…”

Cliff just stands there, stammering, eyes glassed over with tears as Red and Bestest continue to pummel against him, babbeh hoofsies patting softly against him.

“Cwiff…Cwiff…”

inhale

“HUUHUUU! CWIFF AM WOWSTES’ DADDEH EBAH! BABBEHS NU WUV CWIFF NU MOWE! NUUUHUUUHUUUU! NU MOWE, NU MOWE!”

And with that, your Daddeh starts to turn around, see-places looking crazed with anguish. Before anything else, he locks eyes with you and runs over, using his mouth to pick you up by the poopie scruff of your neck. In his haste to run away from all the saddies, though, he’s definitely not careful, as you feel his teethies bite into your back! You let out as shrill of a scream as you can…which is really more just like a loud wheeze. No one hears your suffering.

With your tiny, broken body in his grasp, your fluff slick with poopies and boo-boo juice, Daddeh turns towards the fence, and races through the hole in it, grunting in pain as he snags some of his fluff on it. As he flees into the field with you, as you start to pass out from all the pain, you can hear your Mummah yelling after him behind you.

“Mummah nu wan see dummeh Cwiff EBAH again! Hatechu! An…an’ bwing back bestes’ nummies fow Mummah su can make bestes’ miwkies fow babbehs, dummeh!”

You would never see her or your siblings again.

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The last beating your Mummah gave you broke something in you. Well, it actually broke a lot of things. You can’t really move anymore, and you just dangle limply from Daddeh’s mouth. You can’t seem to get the taste of boo-boo juice out of your broken mouth, and your thinky-place won’t stop throbbing. You can still wiggle around your upper body, and your left and dummy right leggie, but…that’s it. Not that you want to wiggle anything around, every movement you can still make sending shockwaves of the worst owwies through you. Oh, and there’s a gaping wound where your right hear-place used to be, burning with a deep pain the won’t go away.

Time blends together, with you just hanging there. Something hurts really, really badly deep inside of you, and for once, it’s not just your heart this time. Spitting up a bit more boo-boo juice, you try to look around, everything so blurry, much hazier and darker than usual.

You’re not in the field anymore, that’s for sure…you really don’t know where you and Daddeh are. You couldn’t ask him even if you wanted to, and he couldn’t even answer, considering how he’s currently carrying you. All he does is cry and cry, huu-huus muffled by your body, tears rolling down his fluffy cheeks. His teethies are still digging into your back…you wiggle in discomfort, trying to let him know something is wrong, but that just brings more pain.

kaff, kaff “Dddah…h-huw…huwties…”

Ouch. Every word you try to say makes your mouthie feel even more broken and not pretty, so you decide to stop trying to talk at all. Thankfully, Daddeh hears, and sets you down onto the rough ground, looking you over and sniffing your body.

“Huuhuu…wha wong, Poopie babbeh? Tu many huwties? Huu…boo-boo juice nu ‘sposed tu come fwom babbeh’s mouthie an’ poopie-pwace…”

Daddeh sits down next to you, you think. It’s pretty hard to tell what’s happening around you now. His crying grows louder, you know that for sure.

“Huuhuu! Daddeh wet spechuw fwiend gib Poopie babbeh wowstes’ huwties! Wai Cwiff wet spechuw fwiend du…pwease nu gu fowevah sweepies, poopie babbeh…Daddeh gib huggies tu make owwies gu ‘way…”

Daddeh reaches his hoofies down and scoops you up, your broken body flopping around, unable to support itself anymore. You scream internally, your ragged, wheezing breathing growing rapid from the pain. Did Daddeh say…forever sleepies? No! Please no! Why aren’t the huggies helping? Why are they hurting you so much? Why?

“Huu, nu cwy, babbeh…Daddeh wuv babbehs, babbehs…babbehs…”

Daddeh places you back down, his own breathing growing quicker and quicker from all his saddies, crushing his already weak resolve. He forgets about your owwies for a moment as his own heart-hurties overtake him.

“Huuhuu! Babbehs nu wuv Cwiff nu mowe! Spechuw fwiend nu wuv Cwiff nu mowe! Cwiff nu hab famiwy nu mowe! Poopie babbeh am wastes’ babbeh! HUUHUU! CWIFF WOWSTES’ DADDEH! Tu many heawt-huwties! Huuhuu!”

You don’t know how long you lay there on the cold, hard ground, listening to your Daddeh sob and cry harder than you’ve ever heard him cry before. You didn’t think anything more in you could hurt, but listening to this…you have the worst heart-hurties ever. It’s all your fault, isn’t it? None of this would’ve ever happened if you didn’t exist. Daddeh would still be with Mummah, with Red and Bestest babbehs…it’s all your fault.

You just lie there, motionless, unable to do anything. Useless, like always. Eventually though, your Daddeh’s crying begins to quiet down, replaced with the sounds of a grumbling tummy.

“Huu…Cwiff am su hungies…nu hab nummies since wakey-timesie…Poopie babbeh hungies tu?”

You can’t even hear what Daddeh is saying anymore. He sounds so muffled…you try to say something in response, but…

kaff, kaff, kaff

“Nuuhuu! Poopie babbeh nu sound pwetty! If huggies nu wowk fow make huwties gu ‘way, den mebbe…mebbe miwkies hewp poopie babbeh? Huu, bu’ whewe Cwiff find miwkies ow nummies…”

Daddeh gets up, and start to…waddle away from you? No! Where’s he going?

“Cwiff nee’ gu find nummies fow Cwiff, an miwkies fow babbeh…huu, nu knu how find miwkies, bu’ Cwiff wiww! Fow wastes’ babbeh! Cwiff sabe babbeh, den be gud daddeh agin! Be bestes’ daddeh!”

Your Daddeh gives you a gentle pat on the head, which makes your mouthie hurt.

“Babbeh nu move! Stay wite hewe, babbeh! Cwiff back soonsie! Daddeh wuv! Wiww be wite back! Pwomise!”

You wish you could understand what he’s saying, but you just can’t concentrate on anything anymore. Your thinky-place is throbbing so badly, and you feel so tired.

Suddenly, you watch as your Daddeh turns back around, and waddles off into the darkness encroaching on your vision. No! No! Why is he leaving you? Please don’t leave! You love him! Please come back!

You try to muster every ounce of willpower and strength you have in your body, every single fiber of your being, to get up, to go after him…but all you can do is continue to lie there, broken, as you watch your daddeh start to disappear into the distance. The first fluffy to ever show you love, to ever care for you, your amazing Daddeh.

“Dd-ddah…n-nu weev bbah…wuv…”

He’s…gone. He left you. Your Daddeh left you.

“Dddah…nu…n-nu wuv…?”

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You can’t keep track of how much time passes anymore. Some buzzy friends showed up, and you thought they might help you feel better. but they were mean to you, landing on your body and taking small nibbles from you. Stupid buzzies! You’re not something useful like nummies, you’re just a poopie babbeh that nobody loves. Not even your own Daddeh loves you anymore.

More time passes, as far as you know. You can’t help but throw up some more, sicky-water tinged bright red with boo-boo juice. You just…can’t anymore. You’re so tired, lying here on the ground. It’s so uncomfortable, and you feel so scared, and so alone.

You close your see-place, trying to think of something to comfort yourself. You can’t hug yourself, Daddeh left you, Mummah hates you, Green babbeh is forever sleepies, Red babbeh thinks you’re too sad, Bestest doesn’t even know you exist…what comfort do you even have anymore?

What comfort did you ever even have?

Your mind wanders to the poopie pile. Your safe, cozy poopie pile. The only true safety you ever knew in your tiny, insignificant life. You imagine yourself there, nestled in the warm muck, safe from hurties, safe from monsters…your safe little nestie. Your home.

Comforted by thoughts of the poopie pile, you start to fall asleep, despite the unending pain. Distorted thinky-place pictures flicker through your fading mind. You see your Daddeh, giving you huggies. He came back! You see a pretty flower, looking so, so tasty. You’re so hungry. You see your Mummah, and she…

With a pained gasp, you wake up once more. Only for a little while, though. You just can’t stay awake much anymore. The pain lessens some, numbness growing from within. Maybe you’re getting better, even without huggies or milkies? You still can’t move, though.

More dreams. Red babbeh and you, frolicking in the grass. Your right leggie is fixed, and you can give real, incredible hugs! You run around and play, running back towards your family with Red. You see Mummah…

You wake up again with a groan. You can’t really see anything anymore. Everything is so dark, and it’s so scary. You cough. You wheeze small, shallow breaths. Are you…are you going forever sleepies? No! Please not yet! You’re only a little babbeh! You need to find your Daddeh, and get huggies and wuv from him! That’s the only sure way to fix hurties of this magnitude!

You want to go find Daddeh right now, but…you’re still just so tired. You don’t want to go forever sleepies, but maybe…maybe just a little bit of sleepies would be okay? Yes, definitely. After all, the pain is almost entirely gone, you just need a little, more, rest. You lay your head against the ground, imagining the poopie pile again, getting nice and cozy. Your wheezing slows. Your little heart shudders weakly. Your see-place closes.

You see your family. Even your Mummah is happy to see you this time, which confuses you. You hug Red, you hug Green, you hug Bestest, whose fat makes for a great hug. Daddeh nuzzles you, and gives you a flower nummie! You think it tastes good, you can’t really tell. But then, to your amazement, Mummah offers you milkies from her milkie place! Happiness surges through your being. You rush forward, latching on, suckling like your life depends on it, listening to Mummah sing her mummah song, just for you, though you can’t really make out any of the words. You suckle so fast that some milk spills out onto the ground. Oh no!

Looking down at the milk, you see your reflection, and you stop for just a moment to study yourself. It’s hard to see, with the growing darkness tinging the edge of your vision, but your brown fluff is shiny and clean, and both your see-places are open again! It’s about time. But that’s not what you’re really looking at.

What you’re looking at, and what your family is looking at in awe of, is your mane. Your beautiful, deep, dark purple mane.

It’s so pretty. You run a hoof through it, watching as it glistens and flows. You’re such a pretty babbeh, you think with pride.

It’s so purple, and it’s all yours.

It’s so pretty.

They all love you.

You’re so pretty.

You’re so

so

so pretty

…

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I was thinking of maybe doing an epilogue or something to cover the fates of the rest of the moron family, unless it’d be better to just leave the ending as is? Not sure.

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Well met! Epilogue would be nice, Although statistically we already know what is going to happen lol

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Epilogue would be nice, ideally one where the mother and red explode into a pile of giblets

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I wonder if Cliff would go back to the nest once he finds out poopie is dead. I bet the cat would also make return trips for the other foals to eat

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I would like an epilogue but only because I want the babies and momma to starve or be eaten. Cliff can live or not. Don’t matter to me. But I don’t know if that enhances the story. It could.

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I want an epilogue just to read about the bitch mare suffer. Cliff is worthless and preferably could just become roadkill. But the remaining trio should suffer.

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Id love a epilogue or a where are they now, Id also like to know why the dad had a name. I assume he was a run away or the like.

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Don’t give a shit about Cliff, he was useless but sorta tried. But I need closure with the horrible mother!

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It’s mentioned in the previous chapter - Cliff is a runaway for the classic reason of wanting a family and to avoid being neutered.

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Nah nah, the red and other foals, and of course the BITCH mare, must suffer

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Please, let me see these retards suffer

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Seems like he left his balls behind anyway

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ah thank you!

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I want to see his father’s expression now

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