You know, I like your stuff—but a lot of it is so black and white. Poopie Monster is a perfect, flawless victim Mary Sue who is tormented for things she can’t control, and her siblings are horrible slobs who get away with everything in the short term while destroying themselves in the long term through their own refusal to listen to Poopie Monster.
And there’s nothing wrong with that, even, necessarily. We all like a good poopie justice story sometimes. But there’s something so personal and vicious about this series that it honestly feels like a revenge fantasy. It always felt uncomfortable to read because every scene felt like an idealized projection of a personal experience.
Which, you know, writing based on personal experience is fine, too—but from the first few pages I read, it just felt like the kind of story an angsty edgelord writes where they have Rick & Morty level IQ, and everyone else just doesn’t get them—taking things that actually happened and fictionalizing them so that the writer’s Mary Sue is always right and anyone who disagrees with the writer is portrayed as an idjit, and the writer goes on to win bigly while their detractors end up groveling at their feet. It’s that, but with way more vitriol.
I might be missing some context. I apologize if you’ve explained this in the past, or something. I’m also very sorry if your own family was anything like this—it is a lot more understandable if that’s the case. But I don’t know anything about you, so I’m just going based on what I have.
In a technical sense, I think your art is far superior to your writing and you should probably invest in a tablet if you decide to create more content. Let the art tell the story for itself. While your writing is basically just blocks of sentences separated by ellipses, your art has a distinctive style to it, and I would imagine most people on FC would recognize it by now.
Some of the issues I talked about in the early few paragraphs may actually be a side effect of the way you tell stories through brief sentences, and I think that with your excellent artistic style, simply telling a story through a few panels of art instead would be phenomenal.
But, as always, that’s just my opinion. You arem’t obligated to listen to me, obviously, and what really matters is whether you and your audience are enjoying what you create. 