Here’s part one of my comic Deserve To Be Loved! It’s a hug box comic where a litter pal gets his happy ending. Please tell me if the structure is hard to read! 
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The text in the middle panel is getting eaten by a border. That’s the only nitpick I can give to the structure
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I just noticed that now, thank you for pointing it out! I’ll have to be more attentive about those texts ( ಠ ಠ )
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I love litterpals getting hug box, actually I love ‘ugly’ fluffies in general, and your art style is very cute!
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Thank you so much! 
And same, I love seeing ‘ugly’ fluffies getting love
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Quite an interresting start that is able to branch out into many boxes. And eventhough realistic the clothing change was a bit confusing for a second, but overhaul very good
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Those pleading eyes on the litterpal just begging for someone to love them…
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It is! I swear it is! D:
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Thank you! Do you think that it would be better to have the characters wear the same clothing or different? I can see why different clothing would confuse people so I’m considering doing it like a normal cartoon would and have a character wear one outfit.
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I tried to cram as much sorrow into those eyes as possible!
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“Which fluffy do you want?”
“Gimme that one in the poo box!”
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omg those eyes 
so much detail, the broken hearts inside! 
gosh it looks so so pathetic and weak
great job
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I already like the direction this is going, but apart from what the Owl has already noted, the image resolution is too low.
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The broken hearts in his eyes! Aww
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Heyyy in her defense the litter pal is very cute!
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Thank you! I tried very hard to make the eyes as big and sad as possible so I’m glad you like it!
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I don’t really know how to make the resolution better I’ll have to find out for the next part. Thank you!
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!!! I’m so glad you liked that detail!!
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- what device do you have?
- what program do you use?
- what resolution?
- do you play with FC site percentage? (the 50%, 75%, 100% thingy in preview)
- use PNG you monster. seriously, jpg/jpeg is evil. bane of artists. unless you don’t have space on your device… still tho
- do you compress the image?
- do you add effects in a different program?