Before The Storm - Part 2: The Hellish Herd Ch. 2 [By BFM101]

You know making the old fluff step daddy would put him in a good place to teach Travis to be the next advisor. That’s only a thought.

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I have some ideas but I was to keep some of my predictions close too the cuff so I know that I actually was close without causing any influence, even if it is subconsciously.

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Not a bad idea, but I fear Crassus might be too old for that.

Still, he’ll take Travis under his wing and teach him all he can. If Crowley says Travis is a smart Fluffy then Crassus has no reason not to believe him.

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Yeah, he may not have the temperament to deal with more than one foal.

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I’m kind of thinking that Coral will get jealous (for good reason or imaginary ones) over Maggie. I see trouble there. Especially if the other mares look to Maggie more. I mean, she seems like she’d be more sympathetic and all to their plight. Especially if Coral gets knocked down a peg or two.

While I know a fluffy getting raised up is only setup for them getting pushed down, I kind of hope part of Maggie’s ups and downs involve recognizing her value. She is a protagonist, for now at least, so I see a worthwhile journey there.

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I’m really absorbed into this. Tantalizing and intriguing.

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