Big Baby, Part 3 [by ChungusMyBungus]

ThatsWhy · September 2, 2023, 11:15pm

Look at this babbeh and tell me what you see.

WildeFaun · September 2, 2023, 11:36pm

Christ dude, that’s bleak

Mikahorsie · September 4, 2023, 4:59am

Dear God… I do not want to meet a Mafia that would pee on my mouth.

3KindlyOnes · September 8, 2023, 5:56pm

Wait when could his eyes open? I thiught they were glued, what did i miss?

chungusmybungus · September 8, 2023, 5:58pm

Ah that’s absolutely my bad, I completely forgot that myself when I was describing the corpse. I’ll fix it now.

ThatsWhy · September 8, 2023, 5:59pm

I like the idea that it finally broke the glue when it was too late lol

chungusmybungus · September 8, 2023, 6:01pm

Eh, not bad but I’ve fixed it either way.

3KindlyOnes · September 8, 2023, 6:35pm

Sorry for the nitpick btw meant no ill will at all

chungusmybungus · September 8, 2023, 6:38pm

Nah I honestly appreciate it, I try my best to avoid flubs like that in my writing, I welcome people pointing them out so I can go back in and fix them.