I see! I suggest indicating that in the story, as fluffies usually say thanks for the food before eating. Just having Georgia look around and seeing the sketties are all gone, or noticing that Deedee was carrying out a bunch of empty plates, would do wonders to clear up that confusion. Or in my suggested version, maybe Cobbler ran off to fetch his mom because they were getting sketties and he wanted her to have them.
We decided to incorporate some of the community ideas. We’ll be doing a version two of this story. This will be the non-cannon extra brutal edition. To be preserved, but not part of the lore.
I’ll likely PM to drop some ideas on you and get some feedback.
Love it, from the start to the horrible end of the bitch mare and her spoiled foal.
Glad the remaining foals have good homes.
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glad you liked it
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Great work, very engaging story and Dee Dee don’t take any shit. I respect that.
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