She died of old age i think. Look at her hair and the wrinkles under her eyes that’s the sign of old age. Her heart didn’t break so she was able to live longer than expected due to the babies giving her strenght.
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I love your works, always happy to a new piece from ya about whatever and the outcome you had plan for fluffies/topics. Just wanted to say it.
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I really didn’t expect that. I thought she was beaten or something.
Instead, she ran from home because her fully grown fluffy kids got adopted, which presumably is something they wanted for them selves.
That was her big trauma?
What a garbage fluffy.
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Good GOOD, YES DESTROY HER PSYCHE.
That’s what she gets…that is ALL she deserves for hurting the little buddies and creating a wedge between them!
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You know, mama is almost downright diplomatic as far as abusers go
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fluffie motherhood is less about real love and more about belonging, that’s why moms don’t get rid of their popo babies quickly, they don’t love them, but they feel they are theirs, petalo proved that she is self-centered and possessive.
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Finally. The ending of the bitch Petal.
Huh. She was a whiny bitch. She had all a Fluffy could want. Safe room, food, TV, Toys. And the woman running the operation treated her nicely. But she had to go on a tantrum because her foals were taken away. Sure it’s somewhat understated, but the lady explained why the foals were taken away. And Petal being a brat ran away, and she let the other fluffies escape too, causing so much trouble.
A fitting end for the bitch for what she did to the boys. Wasting away, never being able to love her foals.
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Oh this is good.
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hey LabCoat I just want to say thank you for the inspiration and sorry for not being able to write my story hope to see more in the future feel free to use D.M.S/B.M.S for any story
keep being amazing
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Lochness deserved a worse fate. They both acted just as shitty, Lochness arguably worse since he was raised by his Daddeh and should’ve been loyal but only punishing the mare and giving him a happy ending is gross to me
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She got a hugbox ending. As good as a toy could ask for
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Wonderful. Simply wonderful! Considering how badly Loc Ness got chewed up, Petal’s whole life was either shitting out foals or leading adult fluffies to ruin. Big Mama, however, was still far more kind than most breeders in her position. After all, she got visits and wasn’t permanently mutilated.
Hell, I’d have been tempted to make her litters “alicorns only” for the keep basket, and the rest would be cat toys or snake food, with Petal dangling in the front row to watch.
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Starting to see the appeal of pillowing.
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Far better then she deserves
Wow. Found this through the 2024 nomination post. There’s this perfect gray area between bitter and sweet, and this rides that line to a great effect. Well done
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I guess Loc Ness will suffer the rest of his life knowing he is a bad fluffy and a bad friend.
-He disovey his owner, a man he give him all and love him.
-He hurt his best friend, a fluffy who is his first friend and cares for him. A Fluffy who didn´t try to kill him or hurt him for been an alicorn.
-He lose his special friends and babies. I understand he had the priority to be a good father but he put that thought over reasoning. His special friend never came back for him and lost the posibility to see his offspring grow big and strong
-He lost his leg and special lumps. Of course his leg was replace by a wheel but what really should shock him was the fact that he will no longer be capable to have babies with a mare. And added that his best friend is going to be a new father could be another strike to the heart, he will always be an uncle but never a father.
I guess that´s all, I can see him suffering constantly every day and night because of his actions. He will revive every act he had done and want to change everyone of it if he was capable, but we know he can´t. Not even as humans can change the past, we only have to deal with the consecuences. And surely Loc Ness will deal with them the rest of his fluffy life, because it will be a constatn reminder.
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Even in pain she caused pain to another
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Petal learned that hell does exist. A fitting punishment