Would she still be crying ten years after? By that point she had been mindbroken for longer than not.
A little formatting advice? Iād suggest not making one big contiguous comic like this. Think more carefully about the reader, and how their eye would flow across the page, along with how it would make sense.
Itās traced. Look at how the fluffy images keep getting reused. Also, this is definitely using stuff from a Carpdime comic. Actually, I donāt think itās even traced; I honestly think itās just copy-pasted.
Oh, dear. Why do newbies not get that we sometimes enjoy traced art? We just need to know upfront that itās traced. This isnāt uni. Weāre not going to kick people out for tracing. Just say it.
Actually, I think everyone Iāve ever spoken to hates it.
Itās weirdly formatted, but fun.
You havenāt spoken to me. lol
Eh, Iāll take it or leave it if the story is good. I just want to know.
Wow, this fluffy was particularly retarded. It really lived up to itās shit rat namesake.