To be fair I wouldn’t be surprised if fluffies were capable of drooling from the eyes. They’re just that dumb!
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Good looking out, editing is not my greatest skill
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What are you talking about? She has plenty of times.
God i love it when a bitch like her gets what she deserved, she was so proud of her beauty now she’ll be what she always hated the most: UGLY.
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Don’t worry about DrunkOnMoonshine.
Hey Drunk, Ace doesn’t come down to the docks where you work and slap the cocks out of your mouth, so why are you bothering him at his workplace?
Really bleak! Great job! I wanted to see Trinity get hers, but then found myself feeling bad for her too. Haven’t seen a lot of pageant content so this was very welcome. Most of all though, the spacing was absolutely perfect! Spacing made it much more readable! Kudos!
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Your username must really be true. Only someone drunk, high, or plain retarded would show this level of hypocrisy.
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Delightfully bleak! The pageant world is so ripe for horrid abuse, this was a great play on expectations.
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Before: Shaking her head back and fourth rapidly, she tried to rattle against the leather straps holding her down. “Nuu! Dun! Nuu! PWEASE! MUMMAH! TWINITY HEWE! YEW FOHGET TWINITY!” With a click the electronic razor buzzed to life and she screamed hard when it connected with her fur. More pain, a great deal with it as he wasn’t being gentle. Digging the razor down he tore great strips of her beautiful coat away with long streaks of bloodied flesh. Her most prettiest thing. Anything fluffies cared mostest about, especially one as vain as her. Cool air hit her exposed flesh and all she could do was screech with such force that it seemed like her lungs would plop right out her mouth. This process violating, soul crushing, and when she got unstrapped and flipped onto her back to continue the process the mare stared daggers up to her abuser.
After:
Shaking her head back and fourth rapidly, she tried to rattle against the leather straps holding her down. “Nuu! Dun! Nuu! PWEASE! MUMMAH! TWINITY HEWE! YEW FOHGET TWINITY!” With a click the electronic razor buzzed to life and she screamed hard when it connected with her fur.
More pain, a great deal with it as he wasn’t being gentle. Digging the razor down he tore great strips of her beautiful coat away with long streaks of bloodied flesh. Her most prettiest thing.
Anything fluffies cared mostest about, especially one as vain as her. Cool air hit her exposed flesh and all she could do was screech with such force that it seemed like her lungs would plop right out her mouth.
This process violating, soul crushing, and when she got unstrapped and flipped onto her back to continue the process the mare stared daggers up to her abuser.
It just flows better, and pleasant on the eyes as it’s more easier to read from writer to writer.
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That is a fair point. It’s something I (try) to do but tbh editing really isn’t a skill I’m great in. Also I worry if I break it up too much people will think I’m just padding out with an invisible length for (???) purposes.
Thanks for the hint and I will try to catch myself doing it but no guarantees as I’m a bit of a noodlehead.
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Let me give you some advise that took me a long time to learn: don’t care what anyone else thinks, even me, if you enjoy what you do, keep doing it.
I hope to hear more stories from you; keep up the good work!!
Due to using translation software to read the entire article, I did not notice any writing issues in English. Perhaps this is a good thing for me?
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“孩子们快跑啊！飞升是个阴谋。”
What’s that mean
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“飞升”is a concept in some Chinese fantasy novels, which can be understood as “crossing to the next realm and gaining stronger strength through cultivation.”
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Just out of curiosity, how does the software interpret the fluffspeak?
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I can’t read all of this, but something about a black… maybe snake? And “my ice cream”.
Fluffy language is easy to read and its vocabulary is mostly very simple. There is no need to use translation software to translate fluffy language. I only use software to translate the normal English parts.
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The meaning of the sentence in the picture is as follows
“You fucking nigger, this is my ice cream.”
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