uh… dude if you need help with formatting then no problem, but this mess is hardly a story… I think this will get deleted tbh, so before that:
- title suggests there’s a first part…? where?
- it’s kinda clear you probably aren’t native. use Grammarly or similar apps (I’m using it rn)
- this.
- use paragraphs and try your stories to be longer than like 10 sentences