The price of entitlement - 26 - 27 [END] ( by: FallenAngel)

dammnnnn
:open_mouth:

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applauds

The best ending for the worst fluffy.

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But the brown alicorn is still alive

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Man, after how much people hyped up the ending… “The seemingly nice herd is made up of psychopaths who mutilate their captives and groom all their young (including the poopie foal who suffered injustice earlier on) into becoming cruel rapists” is not what I wanted or expected.

This is … not an ending I particularly like. It just shreds any kind of sympathy for the other characters, like the poopie baby - he retroactively deserves to have been starved and mistreated now, because he’s become a rapist who’d enf another fluffy to death. The brown alicorn deserves everything that happened to Tangerine and more because he grooms foals, tortures those who cross him, and permanently mutilates/cripples someone for the crime of “trying to run away and die in the cold”.

It’s just … deleting every even slightly good character in the whole story in favor of torture porn. That “I just wanted them to suffer and didn’t think about the logic or implications” statement from last page really shows here.

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The way I see it, it’s the cycle of abuse with the abused becoming an abuser. Or the original author was too focused on punishing Tangerine that they didn’t realize they made everyone else look worst by comparison, extremely disproportionate punishment is the core of “justice” abuse

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Meh. I just wanted to see Fluffies get destroyed. Lol.

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This, people are trying too hard to give a meaning to this. Enjoy the violence

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A man of culture

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Honestly I didn’t think of that. Fines for unclaimed runaways would be a neat idea. I imagine it would be treated like dumping garbage illegally. Lol

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Well I can tell you didn’t read the og story if this caught you off guard. Yeah dude there are no “good” Fluffies in my stuff. Especially with ferals. Granted I’m not nearly as proud of this story as I used to be with it being one of my early pieces.

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Honestly it makes sense to me- if fluffies can be classified as an invasive species, it follows that there would be similar fines in existence for releasing fluffies into the wild as there would be in some states for releasing other exotic animals. And most punishments involving abuse of animals usually are financial ( along with often seizing the mistreated animal ) with only some light prison in especially large or sensational cases. So I often head canon that many areas of the US would have fines for allowing intact fluffies to roam, or possibly even owning an intact fluffy without a special breeding license. I haven’t seen too many stories lately using the idea, but I recall several earlier stories referencing the possibility.

(I say some areas both because many other authors have divergent head canons, but also because, to those who don’t live in the US, we’re actually more like 50+ different countries in a trenchcoat, so what would be reasonable in say, New York, would be considered ridiculous in Idaho, etc. )

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Yup, I wasn’t aware of the story until the comic started (I don’t read too many stories unless the tags grab my attention) and considered reading it but figured there was no point in spoiling myself beforehand when there was a comic coming out. Just generally surprised it’s such a coveted ending!

And despite being an early story it’s still something to be proud of - all complete stories are, even if you look back at them later and say “oh … I shouldn’t have done that this way”.

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Well, i didn´t expect such a dark ending, but i love it.

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Good job to everyone involved! Loved it all! <3

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I mean, the real moral of the story is actually the moral to a lot of stories; Don’t be a dick.

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Well you definitely did a great job making every single character (except Grape and any non-rapist foals) extremely hateable.
If only rapist groomer smarty got his dues too, though.

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Well that sucks. Animal abusers should get the same amount of prison time as child abusers.

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As I said in a previous chapter. His sins finally caught up to him. Tangerine had it good compared to other fluffies, he ruined it and runs away. The little shit miraculously survives the wilds, and found a mate, but was stupidly shortsighted and was a typical “poopie color” hating fluffy, leading to his final fate.

Funny. The farmers snapping Tangerine’s neck would have been a better end for the shit in hindsight XD

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Will do! But I might not be so nice if the fluffies choose the wrong approach o3o✨️

I will make them screech if they’re meanies! ÒwÓ :fire::fire::fire::fire::fire::fire:

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Hahahahahahahaha hahahahaha die for brown

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