This is my first attempt at writing, sorry it’s a bit over edgy lmao. Hope you enjoy.
It was a cold night in Utica, the cars drove past the dimly lit sidewalks as people made their way home from the long day. Carlos was one of those people on the dimly lit sidewalk, returning home from his draining day at the fluffmart he works at.
“That damn fluffmart.” Carlos mutters to himself as he nears an alleyway. Recently the fluffy population has sprung out of control once again due to spring season. It’s not uncommon to hear a Squelch once in a while on a walk thanks to the little waddling shitrats everywhere.
Before he passes the alleyway he hears a few noises and he stops in his tracks, listening closely for the noise once more.
Peep peep! CHIRP CHIRP!
“Whewe mummah! peep peep! Tummeh owies! Huwties!”
The voice was weak, almost pitiful if Carlos had any mercy left in his heart for the little pests.
Carlos turns into the alleyway and is met with a cardboard box with a brown colt in it, all alone and shivering, all while peeping shakily.
“Wan mummah…hu hu, Babbeh su scawed”
Carlos examines the foal from afar and noticed it shaking, it’s shadow traversing under the moon light as its ribs poked through its stained and matted fur. Little guy must have not eaten for days, or the mom just rejected it as a poopie babbeh.
Either way Carlos doesn’t care and starts walking up to the box which startles the foal.
peep! “Nu huwt babbeh! Am gud babbeh!”
The foal looks up at Carlos with wide terror filled eyes, shaking so much that the box is slightly moving side to side.
“N-Nyu daddeh? W-wub babbeh?” peep
“Not by a longshot little guy.” Carlos snickers to himself as he kicks the box and it slides to the other side of the alleyway and bumps into a wall.
PEEP PEEP PEEP!! CHIRP CHIRP “EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!”
As soon as the box hits the wall it flips and the foal comes flying out of the box and hits the wet pavement. The little thing squirms around on the ground as it tries to flip itself over, but Carlos grabs the pathetic creature and puts it in his palm.
The colt cowers and rolls up Into a ball in his palm and looks up at him.
"P-pwe nu huwt babbeh nu mowe… Be gud babbeh and gib huggies an wub. Peep P-pwe nice mistah… Hu hu hu.
The foal continues shaking and Carlos flicks it’s face hard, eliciting a sharp peep from the balled up creature.
“Ha! You really think I’m gonna give some creature that pollutes this earth with more shit and babbehs love? You’re fucking delusional…”
Before Carlos finishes he grabs a hoof and Snaps it which makes the foal squirm in his palm. The foal shakes and wriggles around as it desperately tries to move its now deformed front nub, chirping and screaming the whole time
*PEEP PEEP PEEP! SCREEEEEEEEEEE CHIRP CHIRP CHIRP HAB WOWSTEST WEGGIE HUWTIES! WAN MUMMAH, SCREEEEEE!
Carlos stifles a laugh as he holds the foal in place, careful as to not let it fall off his palm. The foal shortly calms down and it’s screeching and chirping dies down to a light whimper and peeping.
“Well little guy, looks like your leggie is useless now, maybe we should get rid of it?”
Carlos’s words send the foal into a desperate shock, wriggling around and sniffing the air as it peeps and looks around shakily.
“NUUUU! NU TAEK BABBEH WEGGIES PWE NICE MISTAH! BABBEH NEE WEGGIES FOW GIB HUGGIES FOW NYU DADDEH!”
The foal curls up around Carlos’s finger in a desperate attempt at pity, sucking it’s injured hoof as it looks up fearfully. As Carlos stared at the foal for a moment he got a devilish idea. He would give into the pity and trick the foal into thinking he loved him.
“Aww, I’m sorry little guy, I won’t take take your leggie don’t worry…” Carlos says as he lightly rubs a finger along the colts head. The colt responds shyly at first, lightly wincing at his finger but slowly beginning to coo and peep happily, hugging his finger more as it falls for the trap.
"It am otay nyu daddeh, babbeh wub you su muchies! Babbeh wan skettie nummies an nyu safewoom, babbeh wan toysies too!
Carlos rubbed the foals head and gave a smirk.
“Well you see little guy, I have one thing to give you…”
“Wat am daddeh hab fow babbeh? Babbeh su cited!”
As the foal peeped around in excitement Carlos pulled out a sewing needle and pierced the foals deformed hoof. The foal immediately opened its mouth agape and inhaled sharply before letting out an eardrum bursting scream.
“SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
CHIRP CHIRP CHIRP PEPEPE HAB WOWSTEST HUWTIES EBAHHH!!! HU HU HU! WY NYU DADDED GIB BABBEH WEGGIES OWWIES, BABBEH WUB DADDEH!”
The colt squirms wildly as it’s body shakes in fear, bringing its injured hoof to its face, it doesn’t realize the needle still in its hoof and pokes it’s eye clean in the pupil.
“Ha! Bullseye!” Carlos mutters as he laughs at the wriggling foal in his palm.
"SCREEEEE! SEE PWACE HAB OWWIES, NU WOWK, WY SEE PWACE NU WOWK!?
Before the foal can say another word, Carlos pulls out the needle and stabs the foal right in its belly with it, making the foal go into a silent gasp as it’s mouth widened.
“SHUT UP! You shitrats are so annoying, never shutting up, always making noise. Don’t you pests ever just stay quiet for once?”
As Carlos spoke, the foal took in the words, shaking as it’s confidence slowly drained while the monster infront of him spewed obscenities of his species.
“And don’t even get me started on you foals! You things always beg for milkies, toys, sketties, everything! You’re all spoiled and the only thing you deserve is hurties and pain! Your mummah left you because you’re an ugly poopie colored turd and she never loved you. No one could ever love a fluffy with a color like you, you’re just a turd that deserves to suffer…”
The foal in his hand peeped and sobbed as it whimpered, curling into a ball and trembling. The colt looked up at Carlos, it’s eyes wide with desperation for atleast some form of pity from the cruel man.
“P-pwe daddeh, nu huwt babbeh nu mowe. Babbeh am fow huggies an wub, nu fow huwties… Babbeh wub daddeh su muchies and wan gib huggies to daddeh. Babbeh su scawed an huwties, pwe daddeh nu mowe…”
The foal shook in his palm as it spoke, wincing slightly as each word came out of its mouth.
Carlos took no attention to its attempts at pity and grabbed a pocket knife out of his jacket pocket and flipped it open, pressing it against the foals injured hoof. As Carlos began pressing down and sawing at the hoof, the foal worked back up into a screaming wriggling mess of blood and tears. Blood splattered as Carlos struck an artery, the foal now screaming silently in agony as his vocal cords tore.
Soon the flesh around the hoof was gone enough for Carlos to wrap two fingers around it and snap it off, a sick crunch as the bone around the area crumbled onto the ground.
“SCREEEEE! WY GIB BABBEH WOWSTEST HUWTIES, ONWY WITTWE BABBEH, ONWY WAN HUGGIES AN WUB, HU HU HU! Peep peep peep Chirp Chirp Chirp”
Carlos dropped the knife and began to savagely flick the poor creature as hard as he could on its muzzle, slowly but surely caving it in as it gurgled on its own blood soaking it’s windpipe. The foal tried to scream but could only muster a gurgly deafened hum as Carlos proceeded to rip one of its ears off, along with snapping another hoof.
The foal was now in absolute agony, choking on its own blood as it lay in Carlos’s hand, looking up at him with a face that Carlos could only read as
“Why, why are you doing this?”
Carlos grabbed the knife again and wedged the tip between the foals eye socket and it’s eye, scraping it out slowly as chunks of its eye plopped onto the floor with a disgusting squelch. Once it’s eye was fully scraped out Carlos had gone to the next eye, giving it the same treatment as the other while the foal squirmed madly in torment as it gurgled once more.
“Oh we’re no where near done little guy.”
Carlos said as he flicked the foal again and pressed the tip of the knife against the foals small belly and pushed down. Slowly, Carlos carved in the pattern of a square around the foals belly, being careful to only puncture a bit past the muscle as to not damage vital organs.
As Carlos carved, the foal vomited up blood, it’s face now stained red as it began to peep weakly, sniffing around for any sign of help in its blind helpless state.
Soon Carlos had successfully carved the square out and slowly peeled it back and ripped it off, revealing the foals organs, Intestines and all. Carlos wrapped a finger around a coil of intestine and had pulled it out. Looking around for something to hang it, on he found a low hanging street lamp. Tying the Intestines to the street lamp, the foal now hung weakly by its innards, peeping and chirping catatonically as it desperately sniffed the air once more.
Carlos walked up and punched the foal square in the face and it swung back and forth, each swing eliciting a pained peep from the dying foal.
“Well, my work is done here, hope you had fun, cause I sure did!”
Carlos said as he walked off, humming a happy tune.
