Alternate Ending to BFM101's "Justice For Poopies" (by recreationalsadist)

An Alternate Ending to @BFM101 's story Justice For Poopies.

“There there my little one…” The bearded man tried to tickle the foal’s belly with a blood soaked finger. “…it’s ok now, I have you, you never have to worry about an abusive family ever again.”

“Bu… famiwy nu aboosif, babbeh wub famiwy.”

“Oh dear, it seems the conditioning goes deeper than I thought. No matter, we’ll work through that together, oh yes my sweet brown baby, you and I will be the best of friends, and you shall never want for anything. Spaghetti dinners every night, more toys than you know what to do with, a special friend, hell a whole harem of special friends for your every beck and call, you’re going to have so many babies because you deserve to have your precious lineage preserved. And I will feed you and bathe you and hug you and love you and jerk you off and play with you and…”

As The bearded man rattled off all the wonderful luxuries the brown foal was to expect in his new life

…the foal realized that sounded great!

Fluffies have horrible short-term memories and the promise of unbelievable luxury was more than enough to wipe his family’s fate from the brown foal’s mind.

“YAY! Wub nyu daddeh! Wan sketties and toysies and be swimming in bitches!”

And the brown foal lived happily ever after, pampered for the rest of his life and sparing not a thought to how his entire family had been gruesomely slaughtered by his owner.

He couldn’t spare a thought for them because he didn’t even remember them the day after he was adopted. As I said before fluffies have incredibly shitty memories.

The brown foal, now a brown stallion, gazed around his saferoom.

The saferoom was the size of an American football stadium with a TV screen the size of a billboard with FluffTV on it. There was an entire trough of premium spaghetti, his massive harem of mares were lounging around him, and he had so many toys there was a community of homeless people living in the piles. Instead of a litterbox servants picked up his poop and would carry him around if he didn’t feel like walking.

The brown stallion sighed.

“Ah, wife am gud. It am time fow beew.”

Then he clapped his front hooves together and one of his butlers brought him a beer.

Author’s Note: I read @BFM101 's story and had the thought about how fluffies have bad memories and maybe the foal would forget his family once he realized how good he had it. Then I decided to do my usual thing of taking it way over the top.

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This is the most accurate ending possible.

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And then the foal woke up, and realised that because his new daddy was a hippy piece of shit who didn’t believe in the Government, there was no feasible income to afford all the luxuries he was promised.

Looking up from his wet newspaper bed, the brown foal saw his owner wasting what little money they had on paints for signs protesting against Fake Meat for being too close to real meat.

“Dis am wai babbeh voting Wefowm.” He grumbled to himself as he tried to go back to sleep.

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lol! hemp blankets, glutton free sketti, NPR on the radio… there’s gotta be a story there…

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And then the foal woke up again and realized his owner’s behavior was because he was the incredibly spoiled son of obscenely wealthy parents.

So the foal had all those luxuries after all.

The foal sighed in relief.

“Dis am wai babbeh am boting Towy. Enf dose dummeh poow hoomins. Wub being pwibewiged piwe ob poopies whu nu cawe bout odews.”

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I’m just a simple person, with simple wants and expectations. I see a poopie baby taken in by a new daddy, and I expect the poopie baby’s anus to be gaped and bleeding, wrapped around the cock on his new daddeh. “Stop crying, it only makes daddy’s willy harder!”

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Now THAT’S the spirit!!!

A fluffy’s intellect is a real beauty to behold. I agree this is a more accurate ending.

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