Yes, I want to hear more of the specifics in this. I want to hear how unfair it is for Babbeh to be eating shit and screwing with ugly stallions and not getting wipeys. I want it all. Don’t care how—I want it now!
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Lmfao right? Not to diss on them too hard because they’re overworked as shit and frequently their hands are tied by laws and regulations, but yeah. Lol
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And then Baby is fucked to death by half starved ferals! The ending that I wanted, and the ending that we all deserved! I love me a classic revenge story!
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I’d love to see Alex come back to visit a few years later when her mom has her shit together. Baby would still be alive, the breeding hobby would still be going, but the mom wouldn’t even mention baby as baby was now just a project to her.
When she does speak about baby she refers to baby as “it” and then only in terms of financial viability. As Alex leaves she peaks in the room where baby is… what do you think Baby would do or say? How would Alex feel?
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Funnily enough, that’s how the epilogue originally ended.
Alex was going to be visiting her mother as part of a joint-custody deal, the first time she’d seen her since she was taken away, and it’d be through her eyes that we saw Mom’s aborted attempt at a breeding farm.
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What a happy ending for everybody, except for Mom and Baby but they deserve to be miserable, to see the mother in complete despair and ruin and it being her fault is amazing
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I’m a big believer in ‘the guilty are punished, the good are rewarded’ endings.
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Ditto
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Damn, thats a HUGE bitch!
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I want to see this.
I also want a scene showing Mother trying to explain to CPS what they’re looking at—I was so disappointed when it just skipped away lol.
Good job though. I hope there’s a sequel where Baby escapes and discovers what feral life is like. 
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I kinda wrote that last part in another story, ‘Princess’s Plight’
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absolútne krásny príbeh. Neskutočne som sa zabával pri každej kapitole. Dakujem vám.
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The torture of that shitty pig is still not enough, and my bones are still burning fiercely due to anger.
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Being a breeder is not a good investment, but I’m glad Alex had a good ending.
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TBH I would LOVE to see a story detailing the immediate aftermath of the CPS agents showing up, mummah losing her job, her home being converted to a breeding farm with ‘dummeh’ stallions, not seeing ‘dummeh’ sister, and then Babbeh’s last few moments of life. Reflecting on how good she used to have it and how she lost it all (Probably blaming it on babbehs or mummah instead of herself).
But this was a hella good story. Had me laughing at the dumbass’ downfall. 
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A work of beauty. Best thing I’ve read on this site. I was waiting to see how long Mom would live Baby when SHE was the one who had to play either constantly and wipe her obese ass
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