Billy Bonko and the Fluffy Feed Factory (The_Elements_Of_Chaos)

>Billy Bonko’s was a brand of discount fluffy feed

>The cheapest on the market

>Their slogan was “If you can find cheaper fluffy food, you buy it”

>One day they announced a promotion

>Find a lead ticket in a bag of food win a tour of the factory with your fluffy

>Terms and conditions apply

>This is the first time anyone’s been allowed into the factory since they held the same promotion last year

>Find ticket after fluffy bites down on it and hurts his teeth

>“Cool! Free tour!”

>“Bukket hab toofie huwties in mouthie!” cries the fluffy, spraying blood from his mouth as he talks

>Go to the factory and check in

>Some minor paperwork at the gate then directed to the entrance to the actual factory building

>mildly uninterested owners wait outside the factory with their fluffies

>The fluffies are all muttering about “Nu wike dis nummies”

>Bonko rolls up in a wheel chair

>Then he gets up and kicks the wheelchair away down a side path

>It explodes cinematically

>One of the fluffies puffs out his cheeks, “Fwuffy nu wan touw factowy! Dis kibbew taste wike poopies!”

>Bonko produces a flute from his pocket and plays a short riff

>Little orange men appear out of the woodwork and begin kicking the fluffy in the legs and belly and singing

>“Oompa Loompa doompa dee doo. Billy Bonko does not like you…”

>“Is he allowed to do that?”

>“You’ve already signed the waiver”

>Bonko leads them in

>There’s a set of double doors with a bunch of heavy coats next to them

>“Put on a jacket” Bonko instructs them, “This first room is very cold”

>The humans put on the heavy coats

>Bonko leads them into a large refridgerated warehouse

>Refridgerated or not, the stench of rot and death is substantial

>Completely filling the warehouse is a mountain of dead fluffies in varying states of completeness and decomposition

>A dump truck at the other end of the room pours more fluffies onto the pile

>The fluffies on the tour stand agape for a moment then begin to bawl uncontrollably, tears streaming down their faces

>“Dose fwuffies hab foweba sweepies! Huu huu huu…” cries one of the fluffies

>“Wowstest heawt huwties” cries another

>All of the fluffies run up and hug the dead fluffies, crying over them

>“Now,” says Bonko, ignoring the crying fluffies, “what do you think my fluffy chow is made out of?”

>“Go on” he says, gesturing with his head to the mountain of dead fluffies, “What do you think my FLUFFY chow is made out of?”

>“Uhhh…fluffies?” ventures one of the owners

>“That’s right! I have contracts with a variety of organizations to dispose of fluffy carcasses that are picked up on city streets, exterminated, killed in shelters, and so on”

>A bulldozer is pushing the fluffy carcasses through a large hole in the wall

>One of the tour fluffies, still crying over a fluffy carcass, is swept up with them. The others run from the pile in panic

>“Uh, Mister Bonko? I think one of the live fluffies just got bulldozed”

>“Not to worry, he’ll turn up in the next room, where I’ll show you our other main ingredient”

>Bonko leads the tour towards a door in the same wall that the bulldozer is pushing the fluffy carcasses through

>Next to the door is a rack of gas masks

>“Ok. Suit up and follow me”

>Each of the humans is given a gas mask

>On the other side of the door, the fluffy carcasses are tumbling down from the hole in the wall into a river of shit

>Some of the fluffies throw up from the smell

>“huu huu, nu smeww pwetty!”

>“Please throw up into the river!” Bonko admonishes them

>Bonko leads the tour down a stairway and to the side of the river

>True to Bonko’s word, the fluffy who got seperated earlier is floating in the river of shit, being rapidly swept along by the current

>“I also have a local contract to dispose of the city’s sewage. The sewage is then taken and used as a filler for fluffy feed”

>The fluffy who spoke up outside the factory speaks up again

>“Yu see. Fwuffy teww yu it am poopies! Fwuffy teww yu!”

>Bonko takes out his flute again and plays the same riff

>The little orange men appear once more

>“Oompa Loompa doompa dee doo. Billy Bonko really hates you” they sing as they beat the fluffy

>After beating the fluffy the little orange men punctuate their song by throwing him into the river of poopies

>The fluffy floats away with the other fluffy

>“On to the inventing room” says Bonko

>The inventing room contains beanbag chairs and a large bong

>“This is where I come up with all of my ideas” says Bonko, taking a hit off of the bong

>“kaff kaff Pure imagination” he coughs

>A violet fluffy runs up and eats some of Bonko’s other drugs, then swells to three times her normal size with an alergic reaction

>Bonko laughs hysterically as the orange men roll her out

>“I’m hungry” says Bonko, “Should we go get lunch?”

>The fluffies are brought to a room where they are given Billy Bonko Discount Fluffy Feed

>The humans are taken to a cafeteria where there is a pasta buffet

>The humans eat their fill and bring their trash to a garbage chute located between the cafeteria and the kennel

>One of the fluffies gets out while the humans are throwing away their garbage

>She tries to get some of the discarded spaghetti and falls down the garbage chute with it

>“And fuck you” one of the little orange men calls down to her from the top of the chute

>The fluffy comes out of the chute in the shit river room and is swept away by the current

>“On to the next room” says Bonko

>They take the elevator downstairs to a room dominated by a huge machine full of tanks and tubes leading every which way and a huge pipe at the top leading out of the room"

>“This is where we make my latest product. The Bonko Bar, for fluffies on the go”

>Bonko pulls a lever.

>The sounds of whirring machinery and viscous fluids being punped around are heard

>Out pops something that looks like a candy bar, with “Bonko Bar” and “NOT FOR HUMAN CONSUMPTION!” written in large letters on the wrapper

>Bonko offers it to Bucket, now the only fluffy remaining on the tour, “Go ahead, try it”

>Bucket is initially excited but his face falls when the bar is unwrapped and it’s just Bonko’s normal product in bar form

>“No fank ou. Bukkit nu wan mo nu smeww pwetty kibbew”

>“I said try it you little shit!”

>Bonko shoves the bar in his mouth and Bucket reluctantly bites down, crying

>Then Bucket screams in pain

>“Bukkit wose toofie! Bukkit wose toofie!” Bucket cries, his mouth dribbling blood

>Inside the Bar is the metal tag of the one of the fluffies that got swept away from the tour by the shit river

>“Bonko, I don’t want to tell you your business, but it feels like you shouldn’t be showing people this. Plus, most of the fluffies that came on the tour with us are dead”

>“Nobody who really gives a shit is going to buy my product and win this tour anyway. Besides…” Bonko stares vacantly for a second, his bloodshot eyes looking at nothing, then continues, “Oh. Oh shit… did I forget to tell you guys? Someone complained about that after the last tour so now everyone who comes on the tour gets a free fluffy!”

>True to Bonko’s presumptions, none of the owners has seemed too upset about losing their fluffies, and they perk up upon hearing about free merch

>The humans are taken to another kennel where the free fluffies are kept

>They’re really high quality

>“Wow! Two-tone alicorns!”

>“I’m rich bitch!” says Bonko, “C’mon, let’s all take a ride in my private rocketship!”

>Everyone has a great time in Billy Bonko’s rocketship

>Except Bucket

>In all the excitement Bucket is left behind

>He eventually blunders his way into the shit river and gets made into Bonko Bars

(Scenes that I couldn’t figure out how fit into the story without breaking the flow: Bucket drinks pop rocks and coke; One of the fluffies realizes that the shelter it came from killed its mother after Bonko mentions shelters killing fluffies; when confronted with the tour being a bad idea Bonko reiterates that he is high all the time; crazy rumors about Bonko; Bonko is made out of bees and the characters sing a song parody entitled “Candyman can” [sic, no definite article]; Bucket is thrown in the trash; Oompa Loompas sing “Oompa Lopmpa doompa dee do, by taking this offer you agree not to sue”; the other two fluffies’ collars and tags turning up in a bag of feed)

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This could be made into a long form parody if you have the patience. Great stuff.

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