Candy Chronicles 1 (by:Nyquill Fluffleak)

Hello all! I have been a long time lurker, but I thought it was time to take a stab at making comics! hopefully i posted correctly, as I am still new to the new site. This is the first panel set of the comic. There is currently no text, but i have a script and will add it if the reaction is positive! I am currently working on more as I write, so please be patient! Thanks again ~Nyquill

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Curious what the substance on the nipple was that corroded their mouth/teeth?

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It is supposed to be the sour powder, or the capsaicin on the baby bottle pop, kinda stings a persons tongue, but I imagined it to be pretty caustic to a foal.

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To be fair I remember never eating the powder in a baby bottle pop as a young kid because I thought it was too sour. That shit would probably kill a foal.

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Yeah, thinking on having the guy rinse the foals mouth out so it doesn’t cause further damage, unless intestinal bleeding is on the menu…

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Good first post.
Welcome to FC.

I think something like a Warhead would legitimately kill one, so I could see that.

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Imagine feeding one toxic waste candy.

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Welcome! Make sure to thoroughly wash any ferals you bring home.

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I like how you refrained from using dialogue and narration.

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Totally works even without the text. Reminds me of that delightfully depressing spoosh comic with the deaf foal.

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I love how there’s zero dialogue but you can still understand all that it’s happening. The magic of visual media!
Welcome to the community!

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Welcome! :sunglasses::two_hearts::beer:

The expressions are hilarious! I’m definitely saving this one as a reaction image! :joy:
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God to be a feral poopiebaby.

Also you’re better at MSPaint that I’ll ever be.

I’m so uncertain if the man is going to be helpful or hateful with the lack of text that it’s putting me in the same position as the fluffy and I absolutely love this.

Also may I recommend you install the free program Krita for drawing instead of paint. It’s got some great tools.

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Always so good to see new people contributing, ive wanted to do a comic for a while but have never got to it.

Excellent Work! :glee:

Also you little poop boi get back in there!
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They must’ve changed it at some point because the ones I’ve eaten don’t taste sour at all.

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Well when I say kid I mean around 3 or so. Plus I was just a wuss as a kid :rofl:

Honestly that face is going to haunt my nightmares XD

Panel 2 is where it’s at for me. That proud, happy foal with its face full of innocent anticipation. ••chef’s kiss••

Candy Chronicles Part 2 Here: Candy Chronicles Part 2 (By: NyquillFluffleak)

Looks good, I can imagine the script a little bit.