Chad Thundercock: Origins (EzPete)

Champ was one of a kind and he thinks Priscilla and consequently all other fluffies are evil callous soulless self entitled monsters.

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Also, he got the fluffy because he couldn’t get a dog. Watching Champ die made him relive watching his dog die and fluffies are a reminder that he’ll never own a dog again.

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Guess it’s easier for Chad to cut that part out of himself instead of trying to heal it

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I love dogs and if because of these little chimeras the number of dogs were reduced, I would not become an abuser, but I would not have any empathy for them.

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It would be type :
“I hear some peeps ,I hope if it’s a chick it’s ok😧”.
“Nice mista,new daddeh ?”
“Oooooo :unamused:,they are fluffies,”
(Leaving)

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This is so well thought out, the drama and tragedy is perfect! Reading your comments and seeing your thought process and intentions with the characters confirms what I thought was going on.

If it wasn’t for one person’s flippant arrogance, this all wouldn’t have happened to begin with.

Knew it was going to be a heartbreaker, especially with fluffs’ drawings involved. Thank you for your hard work and fab reads. :black_heart:

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Thanks. I have been trying to streamline my writing and I worry sometimes that I omit too much and make character motives hard to understand. This is probably one of my longest, if not the longest single entry and as I saw the word count climbing, I ended up deleting entire superfluous paragraphs of exposition.

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You did a great job, this didn’t need to be any longer outside of my own selfish desire for more.

Honestly, this is the perfect fic length to me. We went to some real places, the twists and turns were enjoyable and the characters well realised. Who expected Chad Thundercock had a tragic backstory? I was waiting for some gonzo silliness but you played it brilliantly straight.

Added heartache of having my own shepherd type, they really are the best and sweetest dogs. I had to give mine a hug after this.

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