What parts were those?
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From Chapter 2
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Gotta say, not liking Jacob right now with how fast he turned on Daniels. He never once got his side, just Alex’s. She says something and he immediately punished Daniels. Then he asks for Daniels’ side. Like you punished him first then ask, you a moron dude. You should know your fluffy by now. Jacob doesn’t feel like he is a nice human, just a moron. He was warned about Alex too.
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To be fair, he’s catching his fluffy at the worst possible time: when hormones are frying the little guy’s head.
His fluffy is at the point of learning a lot about himself, too.
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Jacob did try to ask Daniels, but Daniels was still confused about the whole situation - remember Alex went from nice to shitting on the floor to screaming for help within seconds.
This is all still taking place in the one day, Jacob wasn’t about to start pushing Daniels for answers when he was still upset by everything. Plus Alex lied and said she might have misunderstood him.
Is Jacob too nice for his own good? Probably but that is by design
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Well, and as readers we’ve got a more objective viewpoint. How many of us yell at the TV or movie screen when the characters are doing something obviously stupid from our perspective but seems reasonable from theirs?
“YOU’RE IN A HORROR MOVIE! DON’T DO THAT!”
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Man, I’ve never felt such white hot rage directed at a fluffy before. I hope Alex gets some horrific pain in the near future and Daniels gets to live happily afterwards. Fucking great work.
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