Desert Fluffs: The Prologue [Thebitz]

Just a quick note before the story. I’m going to be trying to post a chapter of this each weekend as kinda more consistent way to improve my writing. Any and all criticism is encouraged and ideas are appreciated! Hope you enjoy! <3


Nebula sat contently in the backseat of Nathan’s truck as they cruised along a lonely desert road, bumbling along as she coo’d and babbled. Nebula was a beautiful, show worthy pegasus with black fluff that lightened up in patches to a blue-ish purple. Her mane and tail was a more indigo colour but most importantly she was a soon mummah! And her babbehs weren’t just regular babbehs, they were the bestest babehs! How did she know that? Well her daddeh told her of course!

Taking a break from singing her mummah song she trotted in a small circle on the seat before standing up on her hind legs, using her fore legs to stable herself on the seat. She wasn’t heavily pregnent yet, only a week at this point so she still maintained mobility. It was dificult with her height but she tried her best look out at the back window. The tuckbed was filled with various cages, packed with other fluffies, mostly those of poopy colours but a few had some nice tones to them. A tarp had been strapped overtop of them to keep them a bit cooler as they drove to ‘Da buya’ whatever that meant.

“Daddeh? Wai nu let odda fwuffies in cool vroom vroom?” Nebula babbled out, flopping down on her side, looking up into the front seat.

Nathan wasn’t sure how to explain all those fluffies were going to be sold off, to some research institute a few hours away. He wasn’t sure how to explain they weren’t really worth the trouble keeping comfy like she was.

“Daddeh?” Nebula spoke out again when she didn’t get, with a sofft ‘huff’ she stretched herself out to step onto the centre console, trying to get into the front seat. “Daddeh, ansa Nebuwa?” As she spoke a second time Nathan finally took notice of her trying ti get inti the front seat.

With a quick scan down the long lonely road to make sure there wasn’t any traffic he grabbed hold eitherside of her and pulled her into his lap, one hand quickly returning to the wheel as the other began to pet her, earning a cute coo of affection. “Don’t worry about that princess, how about you tell Daddeh about your babies?”

This of course was a distraction tactic but considering Nebula had maybe half a brain cell to her name it worked wonders and so it went for a few hours, trundling down the road, listening to fluffspeak and mummah songs. It was getting ti evening now, the sun hanging low in the sky, the temperature lowering considerably, providing relief for the fluffies in the back.

In the twilight hours of the day however visbility becomes much harder and alongside the constant distraction that was Nebula, Nathan didn’t spot the rough patch in the road until it was too late. “O-Oh fuck!” Nathan cried, (earning a ‘Bad Wordsie!’ From neubla) out as the truck bounced and skid, losing traction. A second late the truck slammed into the ditch at the side of the road.

For Nebula all she heard was a bad wordsie from her Daddeh before she was tossed suddenly and violently about. She cried with a loud ‘SCREEEEEE’ But after a few brief moments over and she was left cowering in place, hooves over her eyes. That was when she felt it, a drip of hot liquid from above her. Slowly opening her eyes, the fluffy looked up.

“D-Daddeh?!”

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Should’a kept his hands on the wheel. See? Fluffies kill.

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They gone die

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Saying fluffies are gonna die is like saying water is wet, the question is how!

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Fluffy pony drowns

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