Dumme Bwoda had enough! Part2 (Chad Lapposki)










Weird cut strikes once again!

the origina monologue

'ou know, dummeh bwuddah am tiwed of 'ou
aww ‘ou do am scweamin’ at fwuffy, nu wub, nu nummies an’ nu huggies.
‘ou kiwwed aww ouw sistews an’ bwothews an’ mummah too…
‘ou keep cawwin’ youwsewf bestes’ babbeh buh 'ou am not gud babbeh, ‘ou am dah wowstes’ babbeh ebah.

fwuffy wobed 'ou, fwuffy weawwy weawwy wobed 'ou
an’ nao that 'ou am about go foweba sweepies hab dah bawws to caww fwuffy wobewy bwuddah

how pathetic…bye bye bwuddah

wong wibe dah kin’

this version had Bestest still alive after the fall, Dumme would use bestest body as a pillow for a safe land
then Dumme would look at his dying brothers and proceeds to shit on it but then rethinks of it

Fwuffy wouwd gib 'ou bad poopies bwuddah, buh 'ou am not eben wowff of them

at dis point, fwuffy do not cawe if fwuffy die wite hewe.
i’ww stiww be happy that i’ww die fwee

multiple endings

I had multiple other endings for Dumme

  • sitting in the middle of the road and accepting death by taking an incoming truck at full force.
  • while Dumme leaving the alleyway, he gets hit by a falling piano in looney tunes style.
  • getting hit by a running bike.
  • this one still involves Lory but Dumme gets adopted by her owner
  • Dumme wakes up and realizes it was a dream and he still stuck with Bestest
  • Getting kidnapped by a seagull
  • edgy ending, Dumme likes how he killed his brother and starts to hunt down other bad foals
  • Gets a bad diarrhea attack and explode.

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I think your alternative ending of Dumme getting vored by a seagull and depicting his struggle as he slowly disappears into its gullet would also have been quite entertaining.

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i love this

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“Wong wive da bestest” is unironically such a fucking raw line given the right context.

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LONG LIVE THE KING

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