Okay! Here’s Chapter 3, part one for the flashback!/Dream sequence. This ended up being wildly long, so sorry for the delay. Hopefully Chapter 3.5 is a lot easier to get wrapped up. Thanks for reading this ridiculous detour.
“Dung” Chapter 2
Spoilers, Lol.
Truth be told, Elizabeth’s Voluntary Retirement is gonna be really interesting. Now you might be wondering “A Bitch Mare Retiring? That sounds too good to be true!” And it is! But how it all unfolds will be fun to write out, lmao.
Bonus Doodle: The “DISGOSTIN’ Uglies” and one Deformed Fluffy.
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Bro got into watching one too many Andrewnism videos on YouTube and a fucking lightbulb went off.
Can’t wait to see this bitch mares fate!
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Honestly think this story might be in for the long haul. Comeuppance is sweeter when it’s long delayed.
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Truly unique style.
Please don’t do that trope of fluffies knowing about human things (like youtube) in others… it is no good.
Thanks for the compliment. Is there a reason why they’re not supposed to know about YouTube, or is that just an overdone convention?
It is more my opinion… for a while everyone was slipping in references or 4th wall breaking “funny” throw-away lines, it breaks the flow imo.
But also, as far as narrative, how would fluffies know what youtube is or how to place an abstract concept in correct context?
Imo, jokes like that are best in edits or one-off “alternate versions” not in your flagship work (I would call this your flagship work anyway).
Take what you will from that, and keep doing what you do. I like the way you represent memories and the inner thought process of fluffies… childish, chaotic, a bit schizo… good stuff!
Oh, that’s interesting. I had always assumed that FluffTV had a regular YouTube channel, and most people just used Chromecast/Roku to play their videos and playlists on YouTube. Also, you know how chaotic and random Autoplay/the recommended videos can be. 
I highly doubt any Fluffy owner under the age of 45 can even be bothered with cable anymore; our family cut cable and never looked back when I was 15. (I’m 29, for reference). Good riddance! 
Truth be told, I consider this more or less my throwaway project that I’m working on in my spare time cuz I don’t have as much time to write anymore! If you wanna check out my more “flagship” stuff, feel free to read “Ebony the Fluffy Filly” on my account. I’m a bit of a slow writer, but I’m working on chapter 6, and the chapters can be really long reads at times!
Thank you for your kind comments, and I’ll take it into account! I always appreciate feedback as long as its’ kind, which yours was! 
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You know… I didn’t really think about the technical sides of streaming, but kinda assumed Fluff TV was nothing but commercials for crap to make fluffies beg their owners, like kids tv.
Maybe they explain “social constructs” but it just seems beyond the brain hp of a fluffy to me.
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I am under 45 and can’t comprehend how people use youtube for “tv” other than watching specific videos… the autoplay is absolutely garbage and 90% of the content is just some idiot talking about something instead of just playing whatever bs they are yammering about.
I assume fluffy tv is a streaming service, not random videos on youtube.
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