Took a bit longer than I had hoped! Anyways, Obi is my real dog, but he’s got some weird colors and is kind of hard to draw. Also, any and all feedback is highly appreciated!
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Not a bad start but the fluffy looks kinda like a regular goat more than anything else.
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Looks great! Keep up the good work! 
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Don’t forget your name after the title.
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Oh dang, I forgot- thanks for the reminder!
It’s the lack of a mane.
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For me, I think it’s how thin it is. I always see fluffies as being really rotund and cloud-like, lots of soft springy fluff all over them.
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So far so good.
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Aaahh, I knew it wasn’t fluffy enough! 
I haven’t drawn anything puffy or fuzzy in a while, so it’s a bit of a learning curve. The next few pages should have him looking softer, if all goes well.
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In-canon it is because it’s a feral one xD
I will pretend I did that on purpose