Henlo everyone, after reading and taking advice from other people on how to improve my art style of fluffies, I’ve decided to fix my sketch for the upcoming VERY short comic, I hope that it looks better for everyone to see, Hell, even I like how the improvement turned out
I’ve made sure to make them look pudgy, give them smaller legs and more round like, like they should, but don’t worry I’ll draw in the fluff as soon as I make the final look!
So tell me, what do YOU guys think will happen next?
Something about that second panel still seems slightly off to me somehow, not sure if it’s the legs on the adult or the expression or what, but who cares.
Holy hell, what an improvement. These are fluffies anyone could recognize. I applaud you for that, as well as your willingness to take criticism and build from it. Masterclass, well done.
Oh yes thank you very much, I appreciate it!
I’m sorry if the second panel isn’t perfect, it’s kinda hard for me to draw from different perspectives sometimes but I’ll improve on it. I’d love to hear your thoughts on the story so far
Honestly I think I might just be a retard, second panel looks better on another viewing.
As for the story, I’d say I’m interested. I assume this is taking place in either a safe room or a daycare, so this will go one of two ways. Someone will intervene, or no one will intervene.
This looks awesome! No complaints here, these are easily fluffies through-and-through! I’m glad you were able to adjust it without having to scrap and redo a ton of work, it’s easy to get disheartened when faced with critique and just drop it altogether. Looking forward to reading the full comic!!
I hope to god the Poopy baby dies somehow. Punish that mare for being a bitch to the mare who is smart enough to hate fluffies. At least this would be different from the cliched and disgusting scatfluff justice.
I am hoping braided mare dies horribly or becomes a milkbag.
The loving look in the first panel is absolutely beautiful. There’s something very heartfelt about it, your expressions are fab! And those are some very cute foals.
