(before we get in the story, there is four different characters, jackson { J } Laura {L}, those are the humans, the fluffies are, blueberry {B} and Apple {A} Anyways, lets begin) it was a warm afternoon when blueberry and apple where eating the little food from the trash they could find {B) “Appwe! bwuebewwy found nummies!” apple skittered towards blueberry {A} “am coming! sabe some fo’ appwe!” suddenly, apple and blueberry got picked up { J } “we finally got some fluffies!” {L} “yeah, they seem like good specimens too!” {B} “Wet bwuebewwy an’ appwe go nao! ow ewse am gon’ gib sowwy hoofsies an’ poopies!” {L} “Shut up rat! your lucky we don’t kill you” {A} “NU KIWW FLUFFIES! SCAWY HOOMAN!” Laura shocks both apple and blueberry, a few “SCREEEEEEE” 's later they get to a car, the fluffies are dropped into cold dirty cages {B} “Scawy, pwease nu gib more hurties” the car starts, the fluffies can barely see in the darkness of the cages, the car slowly stops a few minutes later { J } “Alright fluffies, poop on us and your dead” both blueberry and apple speak in unison “Otay mistah…” the fluffies are picked up out of cages and are brought into a building, its white halls hurt the fluffies eyes, a thick black door comes into view, it opens and the fluffies are put inside, its very dark {A} “huuu huuu huu… scawy… pwease gib cuddles, pwease bwuebewwy” {B} “Am comin’ appwe” blueberry shuffles over towards apple, then “squelch” blueberry steped on something wet, he then runs towards apple {A} “what am that weird noise?” {B} “nu know…” the lights in the room turn on, it turns out blueberry stepped on a foal, jackson walks into the room { J } “eat that foal, apple” {A} “NU! PWEASE DONT MAKE APPWE EAT BABBEH!!” { J } “Eat it or else blueberry dies” apple sniffles {A} “O-otay, appwe gon’ eat babbeh… huuuu huuu huuuu” apple sniffles again, then she eats the baby, jackson mutters something { J } “that’s foal marked off the list” to be continued
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I want to read the end, but can add some space and paragraphs, the character separation is good, but all sticking together just makes it hard to read. Still, i like where this is going.