Frederick's Filthy Fluffy Farm: Day 4 - Part 2 [END] [By BFM101]

Satisfying end to a great story :hugs:

… Lewis is still a twat, though.

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Eh, maybe. This hugbox thing is still fairly new to him, but he’s trying.

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Nah. The hugbox is good. It’s just what I said in the last comment, Lewis comes off less as a hugboxer and more like someone who would pose as a hugboxer so they could self-righteously judge those around him. He was an absolute dick to Joseph, Kat, and Michaels in a professional setting. He straight up told his supervisor to fuck off on multiple occasions. And this may just be me, but after last year, I can’t take seriously anyone who unironically calls others Nazis. That label has been so misused the last few years, that anyone who says it comes off as an SJW soyboy.

But it’s a GREAT story despite Lewis. Which is an achievement. Has abuse, genuine sadbox, well-written with a satisfying conclusion. No torture porn or asspull happy ending. Just a good story that felt logical and real :hugs:

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Started reading your stories last night. Now I’m knees deep in this shit reading through the lore. Thanks for the neat stories!

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The wall of words Lou used for an argument was a bit too much too quick. Petersen giving an unqualified employee a middle management position out of nowhere was also a bit too quick. How could a random minimum wage employee explain the economics well enough to the head of the company that he immediately gives him a test trial for the job?
I want to know why petersen was so isolated from the situation brewing in his own building.