That is… an interesting looking… creature.
Also, for future reference, please put your name in the title. I’ve done it for you this time.
Notes for the art:
•Fluffies do not have dog noses like that.
•The eyes look positively massive and awkward.
•No clue what the orange spiky stuff behind her is meant to be.
•It reminds me of this drawing of Markiplier.
Harsh. But appreciated. Thanks.
I would rather be brutally honest than any amount of dishonest. I hope you can take the advice and grow.
Good attitude 
There are scores of artists anatomy tutorials and guides to read on here. Good first piece, you seem to have put real effort into it, just gotta learn the basic requirements first ~
On the topic of anatomy tutorials/guides, here’s one I wrote myself. Has visuals by the insanely talented SqueakyFriend, might be of some help.
Thanks. I thought I had the idea “in my style.” I’ll try again.
I’ll try again, look forward to it. I’m not fast. That took 10ish hours.
Scar was cool though. Immensely fucked up and the whole “lion guard” story seemed pretty stupid but it makes some sense
Considering most of my previous work of any quality has been catboys and Scar was definitely a fun, campy villain, I chose to take this one as a compliment.