On a scale of 1-10, how would you rate my textpost series “Vulnerable”? Tell me the things you like and don’t like about and how you think I could improve the series.
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7\10 your story is strong but you seem to jump around and introduce new characters without resolutions for old ones (best baby and the mother) also some of your scenes are a little to fast maybe flesh them out a bit more.
One final suggestion would be to increase your vocabulary, it helps to prevent reputation. Love your work keep at it.
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Thank you. I will do my best to improve on all those things in the future. I really appreciate the feedback
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