Wow what an awesome and at the same Time Dark story.
Josef is such a cruel but cool Bastard and I enjoyed all of it.
Poor Sweetheart I wished she could have had a happy ending sob sob.
You are a grate writer and I’m happy that my first comment was under one of your stories
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Thanks for the comment, glad you liked the story.
If you want more, I’d recommend Home Is Where The Sweetheart Is for the next part in her story.
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Im one it, at the moment imat the bridge
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I like to think that Crimson developed feeling for Sweetheart but I think it is far more likely he just fucked her. Who knows maybe she’ll endure it and live happily with Josef and her babeh
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I dont trust crimson not to murder/hurt sweet heart. I know its ovbivous but i think the only true villian of this story is josef. The herd would have meet there end but not in the painful way josef did it.
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Joseph I will slit your fucking throat you fascist fuck and return Sweetheart to the home she belongs,
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IMO, a just and fitting end all round. I have yet to see a fluffy that deserves a happy ending. Wonderful story ty
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Gotta say I’m impressed with how thoroughly painful this series was to read (in a good way), bravo.
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Holy shit this was fucking GOOOOD!
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So does that mean she lives, please tell me she lives, By no means that my hug boxer but I really need sweetie to live
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Sweetheart has her own sequel series which follows on about 18 months or so after this story.
There’s a happy-ish ending, certainly better than I give a lot of other characters.
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Thank you for this wonderful adventure BFM, you’re such a fantastic writer.
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oh man that surprise ending for Toughie was sooooo satisfying :3c
too bad about Batty tho, I would LOVE to adopt a Biblically Accurate Angel fluffy 
i probably just have a soft heart but here i am in my Clown Corner hoping Sweetheart learns to like it rough and has cute cannibal monster babies w Big Daddy Crimson 
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“Oh im sure Crim-” and immdent heart attack.
Great story, gonna continue to down the rest of the josef timeline.
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ending like a jumpscare from how unexpected it was, but good story nontheless, Crimson’s okay for a fluffy since he seems to get the memo that they’re just pests aswell… only real complaint is that Mother died a little bit too son for my liking but I digress
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If I was to do this story again I’d probably extend Mother’s death but at the time I thought that chapter was going on a bit long.
In hindsight I should’ve split it in half but I was too focused on a tidy ten chapters
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on the offchance that you do return to this story then i would probably sprinkle a little bit more psychological torture instead of just physical, like gaslighting mother and smarty into thinking that they’re the last fluffies left or something like that (sounds ridiculous because of Sweetheart and Crimson’s existence but given how miraculously braindead these things are and how broken their trash excuses for minds are, they’d probably forget about them or something like that and start believing it eventually). also a 2nd generation of gross incest babies could be good since none of the already existing incest monster foals know that Mother is their actual ‘mummah’ so getting one of the especially monstrous ones (pref. Gemini) to commit bad-enfies to Mother could be even more world shattering… definently one of the more brutal stories i’ve read on here, along with Headaches by Gardel, though the little scumbags deserved it for sure, hats off to you
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I thought Josef was gonna find a nice stud…but then I realized he was an abuser at heart…
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greetings 
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I never get tired of these.
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