Kelly's Breedery Redo Part 2 (Violet_and_Mochi)

Cassy’s POV

Walking into the daycare I can see Hannah yelling at fruitcake, scolding him for an unknown reason. But knowing Hannah and fruitcake he deserves it.

Taking in everything I see Jingles crying and rounding up her three… wait, three babies? Her purple filly, her green colt, and her monotone gray colt. Where is her brown filly? I look over to Hannah who has yet to notice me and she has Jingles’ brown filly. It looks to have two of its legs broken and a fucked up wing. Fruitcake has blood on his hooves, and Jingles is in a panic.

I go over to Hannah and gently take the filly. I also grab Fruitcake on I leave the daycare. Hannah can easily take care of Jingles and her other three foals. I will deal with Fruitcake and the hurt filly. I know I have to take the filly to Susan. Fruitcake and be throw in the dark room. I will take over for Hannah later when Fruitcake’s Ass of an owner comes to pick him up.

On my way to Susan’s office I throw fruitcake into the dark room. I know I wasn’t gentle about it, hell I may have broken the shitrat’s leg. Susan might have more work. I continue on my way to Susan’s office, the filly has stopped crying. Its just softly sniffing and cuddling my hand for warmth. That’s cute.

I walk into Susan’s office and explain to her everything that has happened so far. About how I barley walked into the daycare and saw a scene I did not want to see this early in the morning. Then I hand the foal to Susan.

Susan: “Two legs and a wing huh. Give me a hour and a half. I’ll have this little one fixed up for you.”

Cassy: “Thanks Susan, I’ll be back then!”

As I leave I start thinking of ways I and punish Fruitcake without having Kelly scold me for damaging a customers fluffy badly. Maybe a bigger smarty to scared the shit out of him. Or I could just suspen him above water.

For now I’ll wait, he is in the dark room. It will be fine. I need to focus on other tasks. The new products have yet to arrive. I could go see how Hannah’s doing, then I will restock shelfs.

As I’m restocking shelf a car pulls up. So I stop what I’m doing and welcome the customer. She has two foals, a brown earthie and a blue unicorn.

Been a while since I did this, and i forgot how to link stories!

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Story was great, I loved the part where we only got implications of what a fluffy did and never even heard a fluffy speak. You should develop the human characters more, maybe even drop the fluffies entirely. Fuck it, why not, right?

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Its actually a rewrite from an old account! I didn’t like the writing when i started redoing it, and I had this draft saved for a while. I do plan to make the fluffies speak, i just need to fugure out where I was taking this story first lmao! The first was poorly written imo, and i wanted to work more on Cass since i had the background fluffies more fleshed out than her.

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Glad to see you active and posting again

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Yeah! I was thinking about it earlier and finally came back! What did I miss?

Some drama of course

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Oh no, how bad?

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Depends on your perspective. Not a big deal I’d say. Maybe it’ll get worse. We’ll see.

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is this in media res or are we supposed to know who these characters are already?

I put out part one over a year ago