Lizzies First Fluffy! 4b (palutenasguidance)

Cuteness cried and cried in his shoebox, he was coughing from the blush, and his eyes were so red and watery, he didn’t like his “mummah”, he wanted sketties, and huggies and wub! he never got sketties, and he never felt like he got love.

“buuhuuuhuuu…nu wike…nu feew pwetty…wai mummah am suuuu meanie…babbeh nu am fow makeuba’… am fo’ huggies an’ wub…wan’ huggies! wan sketties! buuuuhuuhuuhuhuhuuuuu…” The fluffy said quietly as he layed in the corner and covered his eyes with his hooves, he didn’t know why his see placies had the worstest hurties, the saddie wawa’s would not stop coming out of his eyes.

Suddenly, he overheard Lizzie talking to someone else, and the shoebox lid opened. “Scawy!!” The fluffy muttered as he looked up.

Lizzie and another girl Cuteness didn’t know were looking down at him happily. “See, Ashley? I’m not lying! I really do have a fluffy! I do I do I do!” Lizzie exclaimed as she picked the foal up, causing him to whimper.

Ashley, the other girl, was a few years older than Lizzie, and more mature, her and Lizzie had been friends for a while. Ashley was quite good with pets and she even used to own a fluffy pony a couple years ago, sadly during a house-fire, Ashleys fluffy pony died. Rest in peace!! :saluting_face:

Because of this, Ashley was always careful around fluffy ponies, feeling guilty of her own fluffies death. Ashley looked concerned at how Cuteness looked, he was still messed up from the “makeover”, and he was trembling in Lizzie’s hand and crying. “Why does it look like that…?” Ashley asked with slight worry.

“I gave him a makeover! Isn’t he the prettiest fluffy ever? Sooo cute!” Lizzie replied as she pet the fluffy pony with her finger. Cuteness panicked and didn’t like when Lizzie was around him or pet him. Lizzie didn’t know this as he would never verbally say it yet, as he was scared of having his leg broken again. Cuteness would always have trouble walking ever since Lizzie accidentally broke his leg.

“Oh no! I don’t think thats safe for him…” Ashley said with a worried expression on her face. “We’ve gotta wipe that off!” She said as she put her hands out, asking for Lizzie to put the foal in her hands.

“Really? But he’s so pretty!” Lizzie protested as he pouted. “You have to wipe that off, he doesn’t look well!” Ashley commented back as she took the foal out of her hands and rushed to Lizzie’s bathroom.

“nyu mummah…? huggies…?” Cuteness said to himself quietly as Ashley patted his head softly and walked to the bathroom, Lizzie following behind. Cuteness didn’t understand why this new person was giving him upsies, but he liked it! Maybe a new mummah was coming to pick him up! And she would give him sketties and hugs and love and a good housie! With no shoebox that he’d be stuck in all day! Cuteness quickly jumped to conclusions, assuming this was his new mummah, he had the biggest heart happies a filly could have, no more hurties! no more makeovers! no more shoebox!

Ashley grabbed a small cloth and put warm water on it and gently wiped off the lipstick from the snout, most of it on his snout came off, but the redness on his fur from the lipstick wouldnt come out, and it stained some of his fluff. She wiped the fluffies eyes with the cloth aswell, easing the pain.

Cuteness was sooo happy that all the worstest hurties were going away! She loved the new mummah that was taking care of him, he cooed and purred. Ashley thought Cuteness was adorable, it reminded her of her old fluffy. Ashley lightly pat Cuteness.

Cuteness giggled and cooed. “Wub nyu mummah!” It squealed as it smiled. Ashley was in disbelief, and she looked at Lizzie weirdly.

“No, silly! I’m your mom! and i’m the bestest mom ever!” Lizzie said as she took Cuteness from Ashley’s hands when she was done cleaning him, Cuteness’s move instantly changed and he looked scared. “Nuu!” Cuteness said as he reached his hoofsies out for Ashley, Ashley was confused and a little amused. “Um, i’m not your mom, sorry.” Ashley said with a slight smile on her face, Cuteness started crying. “NUUU! WAN’ cheep NYU MUMMAHHH!!” He squealed as he squirmed in Lizzie’s hands.

“Stop crying! Moms gonna hear you!” Lizzie scolded Cuteness as she lightly whacked his face playfully. Causing Cuteness to cry more. Lizzie had no choice but to put him back in the shoebox and put a blanket over it to muffle the sound.

“WAN’ NYU MUMMAH! PINK hic MUMMAH AMMA MEANIE!! NU WIKEE! peep GIB WOWSTEST OWIES TU CUTENESS! chirp chirp, peep cheep WAN’ NICE MUMMAH!! cheep cheep cheep cheep BUUUUHUUUUHUUUU…” The filly said from the inside of the shoebox as he scratched on the inside of the shoebox, desperately trying to get back to Ashley. He hadn’t had real love and care for so long, even the bare minimum would make him attached to the person who gave him love.
Cuteness pooped in the box on accident as Lizzie never potty trained him, her brother had to quickly tell him how to do it one time when Lizzie wasn’t in her room. He realized he made bad poopies, which only frightened and aggravated him more.
“NYU MUMMAH! hic NYU MUMMAH! CUTENESS AM HEWE! NU MEAN TU MAKE BAD POOPSIES! NUUU! cheep cheep BABBEH AM HEWE! SABE BABBEH FWOM SCAWY SOWWY BOX! PWEAAASE! NU DU NUFFIN chirp WONG! MEANIE PINK MUMMAH AM SCAWYYY! peep peep UUHUUUHUUUBUUHUUUUU…” The foal squealed as he kept up the scratching on the inside of the shoebox, eventually he stopped and began suckling on his hoof to cope with the sadness.

“I’m soooo sorry about that, Ashley! Cuteness is still a little baby, so he cries a lot!” Said Lizzie, not understanding really anything at all about fluffy ponies, all she knew was that their cute, they eat sketties and that they act like babies.

“It’s okay!” Ashley said, still a little surprised as to what happened. “So, what are we gonna do now?” Ashley asked.

“Lets go make snow angels outside before it gets too dark!” Lizzie said as she grabbed her jacket and ran downstairs “Okay!” Ashley replied as she followed Lizzie down, leaving Cuteness all alone.

“buuhuuuhuuu… wai meanie pink mummah take cuteness ‘way fwom bestes’ mummah… nyu mummah suuuu nicey… make sowwy owie gu 'way… buuuhuuu…” Cuteness said sadly as he curled up into a ball, still sucking on his hoof.

“WAN’ NYU MUMMMAHHHHHHH!” Cuteness squealed.

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Enjoying the story, but is there a reason cuteness keeps being referred to as male and female?

my bad, hes a male its just a typo

Cuteness is already mentally broken as fuck and it’s probably only get worse from here. That freakout lmaooo :ahahaha:

By the way, a male foal is called a “colt,” not a “filly.”

Fillies are female foals.