"Miwkie thief gets their reward" Part 2 (SmartHater)

You are bestest you wake with the biggest thinkie place huwties, you only remember you meanie dummeh mummah gave your sorry hoofsies.

You wa ke up a little warmer than usual only then you realise that you are near the fire of your nestie, it feels great yuo look at the fire for an instant it’s really pretty you see the dired leaves nummy, the branches but at the center there is something, something that you can’t quite make out.

But you had other matters to attend to, you don’t know why but you had trouble moving so you called out to the mares since you were smarty, they had to obey you.

Looking at the mummah you saw that they were quite… sad. Why? Werethey regretting being big meanie to their new smartie? Looking more closely you saw something horrigying, a mare holding… a dead babbeh.

She was shooking the babbeh in her hooves while frantically crying the foal eye closed never to open again, the little one died of hunger.

-“Pwease babbeh wak up mak wakies and tawkies fow mummah!!! FOW MUMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!” However despite her best attempts the eyes were still closed off the foal head tilting behind him and him being even colder than his nest.

Seeing this spectacle you were… angry how could this mare be such a hypocrite meanie, she should just have gave him miwkies and everything would have been alright but instead she let her babbeh go foweba sweepies. You WILL punish her later.

Seeing around you found your mummah she was doing something weird letting your siblings suck the miwkie of another mare. Why? Is she so dummeh not to let them get their mummah mmiwkies?

-“Fank yu fwend, fank yu” She says whiole sniffing to the other mare who’s foal were already weaned, the foals were helping your siblings drink equally

Around you similar cases are happening some crying hugging their dead foals while others were feeding others babbehs

-“Hewwo pwease hewp smawty hewe?” You says nonchalantly you had fun watching them but it was your time to shine you will punish the bad mares and restore order

Allthe other mares look at you, the first one to approach you was your mother tears soaking her fluff she looked as angry as before.

-“Dummeh Mummah !!!” You were so angry with her for giving you sorry hoofies “Wai ou giv huwties to smawty?!” you were about to give her sorry hooofies but found out that you couldn’t

-“Ou no smawty” she says holding back anger " Ou jus a dummeh meanie" she retort how could she? Houw could she call you that? You couldn’t move so

-“Giv Dummeh mummah sowwy hoofies and sowwy pooopies” You exclaim the order to the mares however none of them even consider it. Suddenly a black mare comes over and go near you

Finnaly someone to do the job!you tought she comes over you go meet you eye to eye. Her eyes were weird she was angry at you. Why? You trai lof tought was cut off when suddenly she bit a chunk of your front legs

-“SSSSSSSSSCCCCCCCCCCCRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE” you screamed, you tried to run awauy but her being an adult was much stronger than you, she started tugging at your legs slowly making sure that you were suffering until she yanked you arm out.

-'WWWWWWWWWEEEEEEGGGGGGGGIE!!! NNNNNNNNNUUUUU!" you screamed you needed that weggie to run and play, you were terrified as you saw thenmare munching mouth open in front of your eyesseeing you weegie being crushed again her teeth, you didn’t know why she did that but you realized one thing, you needed to run, you tried to turn over but you still coul’t get up

Why were your weggies so dummeh, you looked at your back weggie and saw that your right weggies was gone. You wee too scared to care too and started crawling until your mummah putn a hoof on you blocking your escape.

-“Dummeh mummah wet smawty gu” You screamed in fear and anger at her, behind her numerous mares started emerging while the other still living foals were nursing ,on their mouth were pieces of the dead ones, you were horrified and disgusted.

They all started taking bites out of your skins careful not to give your to much damage to your insides only eating the skins.

-“SSSSSSSCCCCCCCCCCCCCRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE” you screamed in pain “Stawp pwease!!! BLEEEEEAAAAG” You try to plead before a sorry hoofsie make you puke all the miwkies.

When it’s done you were a ball of flesh and was pouring plood. You lost all your weggies and one eye but you were still conscious. Suddenly one of the mare took you by your neck it hurts but you were too tired to even scream. She putted you in front of the fire and you saw a …a… a fluffy skeleton burning.

The meanie stallion never was banished from the herd as your mummah told you, he became nourishment for the herd and the fire, after the toughie broke his legs the mare ate him alive, at the end he was alive with only some of his organs alive before being usedto keep the fire alight.

But it was not a loss honestly, he was lazy and arrogant and fat, he even gave some mares bad special huggie because why would a herd have so much babies in winter, because of a rapist piece of shit who raped two mares one the black mare and the other your mummah.

Not that you would know all that. As a green mare took a branch still burning, you were surounded by the other mares and you knew what would happen. You tried to crawl, squirm, scream anything but nothing worked. Finally a small peice of the branch broke and an ember fell on you

-“SSSSSSSSSSSSSSCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEE” you screamed as the fire was brutally cauterizing your wounds, you were in pain then a liquid hits you, the pee of the mares around you.

As you were being peeing on irritating your cauterized wounds and putting out the fire, you passed out.

To Be continued
(Sorry it’s a bit long.)

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so a fluffy herd that understands that smarties are not really smart and that they are egotistical jackasses

I approve, also how did a fluffy herd start a fire?

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The herd used discarded but still burning cigarettes as fire starters¹. A surprisingly high level of problem solving skills for a herd of feral fluffies.
1(it’s mentioned in beginning of the first part of the story.

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I may have missed it

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Those are some smart fluffies.

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I wonder what they to mares with BMS?

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Well, at least that smarty did something good … Probably cause the death of that herd next generation :ahahaha:

And hey, maybe they let him heal a bit to eat even some more, after all, they could use the help of a punch bag and a Poopie eater for really cold days.

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Hopefully Smarty leading the herd won’t let this foal die or be eaten. Firstly, because no matter how fat the foal is, it will not be able to feed the whole herd with its flesh. But it can be used for something else. Firstly, he can be forced to eat poop when the herd solves its problems with food. It is also great to be a stress relief toy. Adult stallions who want special hugs will be able to use it instead of mares, so that extra foals are not born in the herd that need to be fed. Also, this legless foal can be beaten by other foals, because he is responsible for the deaths of their brothers and sisters.

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Well let’s just says it depend on whether the herd is low on food or if stallion have some needs. A special huggie toy is always nice

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I really like the premise but it’s sometimes difficult to follow along due to sentence structure, some seem to run on without breaks or punctuation. Otherwise great story.

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