What the page says:
Warm…Then Pressure…Then cold…im sure other fluffies would describe it this way…or…try to… But while they felt the warmth again…I…didnt…
Hi raurraven here just wanted to say hi and sorry for the no show. Been revising how i want this to go. Hope u like what i have for now.
Shouldn’t have been born wrong. Little turd deserved it.
Well it’s going in the correct direction
Being born the wrong color.
Everything was actually fairly easy to read except the “I”—might I suggest a white gel pen or paint marker? Either to give things like that an outline in the future or even to write the text itself. Otherwise this is looking good! <3
Thanks for the advice:sob:
it was a lil late for me to take it back and this is my 1st comic so im just learning from mistakes. Nice to know people got interested:nerd_face:
Beautiful, short, tragic
