Script:
Oh God how I miss her…
She always called me special & she never had to say it either…
I could tell with the look she gave me…
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Oh, dear. This isn’t going well for one of them.
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eyes full of happiness
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Idk if I’m seeing it right or not, but I get the feeling/idea of the duality of how a fluffy could get to see a fluffmart employee, this one being even smarter for a fluffy since it’s an alicorn, lil shit even becoming poetic, how most of them out of ignorance or self granted importance and entitlement see a most of the time poorly payed employee as a monster. While the less fortunated one could see em as saviors.
Or how in a more indeep and personal one, how the human actually see this lil green fella, maybe they’re an abuser or someone with some baggage and they get the help that they need from taking care of em…either way, cool stuff my dude.
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I really hope it’s not this trope. It’d be more interesting if this individual fluffy is just smarter than average by chance and not because it’s an alicorn.
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Neither actually 
i liked the idea but then millions of those things would be likable and fluffies being unlikable is an important point in my story.
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Spot on really on how a fluffy would see a human who cares even if that care is mandatory. Especially a ugly one. I tried not to make the twists a little less predictable so hope you enjoy the rest. You nailed it on the employee tho omg youre good. Hope ur ready for her to haunt the narrative:grimacing:
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Depends the writer/artist for what I’ve seen, there were also some that play with some breeds usually poopies/brown fluffies since they were the somewhat descendents of original fluffies or first gens that were more of an actual attempt in making a legit biotoy pet.
If you are interested you can always give it your own spin to that, I believe a certain “pizza demon guy” posted a small guide you could use or take tips from it.
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Just because you see or have an idea of the “twist” doesn’t mean it isn’t enjoyable none the less. If you read an abuse story with a hug box ending tag, it shouldn’t surprise you that has a hug box ending.
As for what I’m ready for, is more of your posts my dude! Keep up the great work, you been doing some really good stuff.
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