i’m not really sure what i’m meant to do but i’m trying hope you like it (sorry for the flip it was impossible to redraw it with my skills so i had to copy it and flip) (also i have very bad quality)
i tried
i tried
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good work!
ALSO
PUT YOUR NAME IN THE TITLE
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Man, bestest must also be special-est. How hard it is to latch onto a mouth-height nipple?
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Not too bad. If i were to give any criticism id say the mare looks a little too lanky, especially around the neck. I’d reccomend shortening it it a little and maybe look around and draw inspiration from other artists.
Two of my biggest inspirations here are Foxhoarder and uR. They have simple fluffies that are easy to draw. Just make sure you add your own twist or style.
Also the “Fluffspeak” can use some work too. Fluffies replace the letters L and R with W. As well as pronouncing words completely different than whats normal. So “No Milkies for ou” should be “Nu Miwkies fow ou”
Not saying you have to follow this advice, do what you want. But if you wanna improve a bit. Then i’d encourage you to try some it out.
Hope to see what you cook up in the future!
(Also yeah what Biorb said. Put your name in the title.)
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Welcome to the fluffpile 
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Just to jump off of what Mister_K said, I’d be a bit more choosy on your coloring: The 2nd panel look like the ‘beast’ baby shit blood.
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Oh my God? Did that foal just sliped and broke some bones at ground level? Only on fluffies for sure.
Nice first post!
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I’d make a fluffu parody but the art is already pretty close to it as it is
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