[Need Feedback] Work in progress horror Mookiedookie

But let me know what your thoughts are on this work in progress when you see this artwork what does make you feel or think.

I tried pushing myself to the limits

This is still hey work in progress I tried a new method using my oc Mookie, instead of pouring feelings happiness, and love into my drawing

I tried to think of feelings and experiences that permeated the darkest pits of despair and hatred I can muster

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wat they take out an WAH HUH?!
:hwut:

Great job so far :ahahaha: very disturbing angle and the kind of happy’ish face adds to the wtf factor

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Oh, I LOVE a juxtaposition of gore and flowers. This is gorgeous so far, I’m so excited to see more!

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Thank you so much @awfulfawn that a honor coming from you gurl :growing_heart:

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It looks like she’s having a c-sec while fully awake and uncurtained. Is that what you were going for? I do like the dawning horror that she can see inside herself.

Gotta say, I love the oddly phallic flower arrangement.

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It’s weirdly almost a cozy pic. She looks…comfortable, somehow? Or maybe just insane. Can’t wait to see this in color!

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Looks likebq wonderful tea party

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If your looking for criticism here what I think.

To me im not sure what kind of punishment this fluffy has taken. It looks between a mix of decomposing and minor blunt force trauma to its face. The reason I think its decomposing is because of the all the flowers around. The expression also looks like she’s happy which isn’t necessarily a bad thing but does make it look a little bit off, other people find it disturbing but I think its slightly distracting when she looks smug as if she doesn’t care that shes broken which is generally not how must fluffies act. Overall I feel as if these three details should be more interconnected to tell a story without words if you want some improvement but it already looks decent if you wanna colour it and call it a day. .

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I think it look better when it’s all said and done

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