Ode to Bestest Babbeh 2 [ by Milky ]

if u really love ur fluffy u will raise it by torture. so that it doesnt grow to be a spoiled turd that doesnt appreciate anything and acts like an asshole. nothing is as healthy for a fluffy as torture

as rq once pointed out, a fluffy isnt worth anything until it realizes that its worth nothing

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@I_might_be_weasel idea is also good ,lemonade would have the same tendency becoming her bitch mom when having foals of her own.

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But also: bestest babbeh arc, bestest mummah arc, munstah babbeh arc (lemonades foal) and will probably get a hug box ending for the alicorn.

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Now that something I would look forward too in this story :heart_eyes::+1::smiling_imp:

Im sure would hear bitxh lemonade ranting “why hit or punish her as she was a good mummah” while almost trying to kill her prized alicorn.

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Exaaaaaactlyy!!! Ooooooo I’m rlly feelin this story now hmhmhmhmmhmhmh.

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Then we will wait and see what you in store for us on the next chapter :blush:

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Give me a few days to get my pacing sorted out and I’ll hopefully have the next chapter out!!

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I agree with you, but your language does make me suspect you may just be in it for the torture…

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No problem will wait patiently for it as always :blush::+1:

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Need everyone to know I’ve mapped out the whole story with cliff notes for each chapter and I’ve already mentally designed and named the alicorn foal and I love her so much thank you for coming to my Ted talk.

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Ah yes, my hungry soul was hoping for more. Can’t wait to see them fucker go full smarty and Fuckin’ Dies!

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I am intrigued. It’s rare to see a story from the POV of the bestest babbeh. Honestly, if this became a redemption arc, it would be the FIRST time I’d see a bestest not die horribly or become a complete bully. There’s honestly too many of those…

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:joy: we’ll see! I’ve kinda got an idea for where it’s going!

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I’m not sure if it’ll become a redemption arc or not as I’ve sort of started to build a story, but we’ll see!! There’s always hope!

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I know it’s going to be awesome regardless of the outcome.

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@Milky I am very much enjoying your Lemonade. Great story. Thank you for sharing your skill with us. :grin:

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Ahh thank u! I appreciate the feedback and I’m glad you like it!

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Ahhh thank you ! I’ll try not to disappoint!

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Lemonade is gonna run away to have babies of her own eventually, perpetuating the cycle that her whore mother was unable to break, isnt she.

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god the words “whore mother” always make me laugh

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