Poopeh Daddeh Part 1 (SmartHater)

First work Please be kind
Your name is Brian you are the most happiest fluffy of All time.
You are a brown pegasus with yellow mane and you live with the bestest daddeh. You have the bestest Special friend ever named Lily a dark Unicorn. Daddeh always said that there are three rules: No bestest baby, no demanding sketties and no hurting others. You always respected those rules.
After some time you and you special friend had special huggies, something happy happened, she became a soon-mummah with YOUR babbehs. After biggest poopie and the nursing of the babbehs you remarked one babbehs that was really different from the other, this was a wingie-baby just like you and he had you special friend fluff. You knew daddeh rule but this was a good babbeh as good as the others but with her wingie and other thing : it made her more than the other babbeh it made her the bestest.
A week later and the foals started to grow, you bestest seemed to have your eyes it made ou even prouder of her but it was a given after all she was the bestest. Your other babbehs grew too they were good but not as good as bestest, you loved them, you always gave them huggies and wub but you loved bestest even more.
One day the babbehs start their litter training but after it was done you tell bestest
-" Babbeh ou no nned to use dummeh wittabawks, ou bestest, ou betta than oda dummeh babbehs"
Your bestest responds.
-" Bu mummah said Aw babbehs awe da same"
You knew your special friend said that. Why couldn’t she understand that thisdid not apply to bestest why was she ignoring her wellbeing, one day you have to tell her to treat bestest better, she deserved it.
-"Mummah just being a dummy daddeh wiww teww hew "
Your bestest happily tort aaway you will nedd to tell daddeh too that bestest don’t need to use the litterbox and to give her skettis always one she can eat.
Day passes and bestest started being … mean around her Buwddas and sissies the other day she called her bwudda a dummeh and asked you to give him stompies you didn’t do it tough nad she tried to hog all the toys to herself. But iwas normal she deserved it all for being the best. Today she was happily playing a game of blockies but a catastrophe happened, her tower of blockie fell, you bestest immediatly cey on the ground, violently thrashing, one of her siblings a red unicorn close to her in order to give her huggies but she punches straight in the face with his sister a lavender colored filly look at it. Suddenly bestest get( up and giving sorry hoofsies to her sister

  • “Dummmmmeeeeehhhhh dis aww ou fauwt!!! Hatchu ,Hatchu!!!
    Suddenly you rush to …Bestest and take your time to comfort her ignoring her sobbings siblings. Your special friend demands to know why you’re not scolding her and not giving huggies to her siblins that she hurt.
    -” Because she bestest, Dummeh mummah, bestest baby did nuffing wong"
    -"Daddeh huwties! Need huggies! " -Your foal yells
    -“Sowwy babbehs shouda benn mowe caweful” you respond
    Your special friend is completely stunned after hearing you talk like that to your babbehs she says nothing same for your other babbehs. You’re about to put your bestest down when you hear loud rumbings coming.
    -“Daddeh " You says joyously
    -“Hello Brian” He says " I hear that you have chosen to have a bestest baby and chose to ignore you other foals pains” He says pointing at the other tow baby that he scoops up
    -“Yus but dat because bestest babbeh need huggies mowe dan them” you respond
    -He sigh “Okay i heard enough”
    Suddenly he grab you with bad upsies youand your bestest and drop you into a dark room that looks cold, he strap you down while you scream at him to let you go , you’ve neven seen him this mad before.
    after many forever(,litteraly half a hour) you bestest tummie start to growl, she needs milkie and you also need nummie, Daddeh go into the room
    -Dummeh daddeh giv mikie Nao!!! Nao!!! Nao!!! Nao!!! you bestest yell
    -Pwease daddeh nu know wat do wing but pwomise neba do again!! Pwease giv nummies!!!
    Daddeh says nothing he starts puttinh to metal sketties on you and the start biting you you yelp in pain
    -“Now let’s see how “bestest” you are, now you dinner come but only 10 minutes later from now you can get it now but you have to hit this button this button will give hurties to you daddeh but youget miwkies and a blankie too”
    What a silly thing Daddeh is saying, she is your bestest, a good babbeh better than theo other and good mannered, you were scared for a second. She would never–
    -“SCCCCCCCRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
    Suddenly all you feel is pain, have Daddeh pushed the button this wasn’t fair he said bestest had to do it but you look in front of you and the one still pushing the button is
    -Bestest Babbeh?!
    To be continued
13 Likes

Welcome to the site. Make sure you put your name in the title of your posts.

2 Likes

This may as well be a folly of hope adoption sign. :stuck_out_tongue:

Welcome, the site has some formatting you might be unfamiliar with. Try playing with your posts in preview to make sure the text is spaced properly. I know some people post from mobile and it doesn’t always display properly on their phone.

Also, try to reread before posting to catch typos and the like. Even the best writers on here make mistakes.

I’m looking forward to part 2.

6 Likes

What are you, gay?

1 Like
3 Likes

Hey welcome man! Glad you made a story. I would just recommend (no offense) that you use spellchecker or proofread your work before you post it.

4 Likes