It is pretty good, the one on the right. The one on the left has a somewhat awkward looking neck. But it definitely looks like you took the criticisms and worked on it
I’m fond of the one on the right! The face and the fluff being different colors is a bit off-putting, but that’s just my opinion.
Like Ace said, the one on the left has a slightly odd-looking neck. It’s good to remember that fluffies shouldn’t really have much of a neck. But that’s all of the critique I really have. I’m glad to see you take criticism in stride and improve so quickly!