Quick drawing, short story: Chip | BunBunThaDunDun

This is done more as “I drew it first, then came up with a little story”. The idea here is disciplinary spanking. I am also going through major shift in drawing Fluffies :foal:

(Big old fuss going on, very much so; not the first time Chip threw a tantrum, but this time he put in it all he got.)

  • WAAAAAAAHHH!!! SCREEEEEE!!! GASP GASP EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! [foal is banging his rear legs on the floor as hard as he can muster, flailing his front legs and wailing as loud as possible]
  • Chip, you better drop it THIS INSTANT, mister! We’ve been though this enough!
  • REEEEEEE!! CHEEP NU WAN DUMMIE KIBBWE!! WAN MIWKIES!! WAN MUMMAH’S MIWKIES!! sniffle sniffle…
  • Chip, you are too old to be drinking your mummah’s milk, you’re almost a colt! Your sisters and brothers have no problem with eating kibble!
  • DUMMEH! GIB MIWKIES NAO!! NAO!! DUMMEH HOOMAN MUMMAH!! [pees himself intentionally to maximize his demand]
  • All right, that’s it, now you’ve done it. You already got disciplined about bad peepees! I can’t believe this!
  • TAEK SOWWY PEEPEES DUMMIE HOOMAN!! WAAAAAAHHH!!
    (He gets grabbed by the human Mummah who holds his upper half down and props his ass up)
  • HUUUUHH?!?!? WAT DUMMIE DOIN?!?!
  • That’s it Chip, you’re getting Sorry Stick until you drop that sour attitude!
    (First lash strikes foal’s bum, making him poop and pee in apparent shock; human Mummah gave him a fierce spanking, leaving red and already bruising marks on his Fluffy rump.)
  • AAAIEEEEEEHH!! CHEEP AM SOWWY!! AM SOWWY!! SITTY PWACE HAB BIGGEST HUWTIES!!
  • Will you eat your kibble now? And pee in the litterbox? Like a GOOD FLUFFY? Or do we need to ask Sorry Stick for help again?
  • NU, NU MOWE SOWWY STICK!! CHEEP AM SOWWY!.. Sob, sob… Cheep eat kibbwe nao… an peepees in wittew boks…
    (He is left with swelling, bruising buttocks, the skin heating up and burning from the irritation; he let his tail lie on his back to no touch the burning bum and propped it up to not sit on huwtie sitty pwace.)

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I love the way your draw tears so much, also this is so good! Lovely art per usual!

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Thank youuuu :heart: I love making tears like little waterfalls, it just looks so fitting in Fluffies xD

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yakuza-0-legend-remix

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Awesome! Its simple and brutal. Great use of color too.

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cheeks hurtd

butthurt

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I really like your art style, and the use of emotions you put into your fluffies. Good job!

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What a wretched little abscess. I love it

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Such a brat! This is fantastic :clap:

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Good disciplining by the owner.

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Your sad/hurt fluffy expressions are the best, can’t decide whether to laugh at em or kick em while they’re down

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So good. So emotive. There’s something so amusing about the little piss fountains too.

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Hit him some more.

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