red and the brown fluffy (by fanbot68)

[fanbot68]

after he saw to poster he went to fluffy mart to get a fluffy

they went in the back to see the fluffies

here’s what the fluffies said red:nyu daddeh pwease take bestest babbeh brown:… cyan:must get to daddeh purple mare:mummah wuv babbeh babbeh’s wuv mummah human red:there are some fluffies here i might get the red one wait what happend to the brown one lizz:seems like they threat the brown one bad and the red one is a smarty red:what’s a smarty lizz: really lets go to library to so you can know fluffies

[Maple]

1: you need to put your name in the title

2: like green text on a white background isn’t the best idea tbh

Otherwise good work!

[SpaghettiDave]

Are you 12?

[SqueakyFriend]

A good start, I like how the fluffies look! I’d suggest separating the dialogue into different rows, though. Like so:

red:nyu daddeh pwease take bestest babbeh
brown:…
cyan:must get to daddeh

It makes it a lot more readable and easy on the eyes.