I’ve been enjoying your stories! The one suggestion I’d make is with your Fluffspeak—you tend to add extra "w"s when they’re not needed. Generally if you only use “w” for “r” and “l”, that does the trick. If a word doesn’t have one of those letters, it’s fine as-is.
For example, you’ve got the fluffy complaining about the Dandyman’s “swinging” — in that case, it should just be “singing.” (I mention this in particular because at first I thought that he had been actually swinging the fluffy around, before I realized what you’d actually meant.)
If you’d like, a user wrote a pretty good fluffspeak primer a few years back. It’s got the basic rules along with a few more advanced ones (when to use the “d” to be a “t” or “th” sound, for example).
Anyway though, good story!