Reunited finale. (Niknik)

Luna waited for Adrian to wake up again. Violet and Snapdragon by her side.
Adrian woke, took one look at Snapdragon, and went to pick him up.
“Well, seeing as the little shit is back to normal, he can make me more money.” Adrian said blankly. Snapdragon flinched,
Luna stepped infront of Adrian, blocking him from reaching Snapdragon. Her arms her crossed and her face held anger.
“Sit the fuck back down.” She commanded.
“You and I are gonna have a little chat.”

Adrian smirked, he figured he could still do what he wanted. But he was sorely mistaken.
Luna held her ground and violet stood with her. Adrian didn’t like it.
“Look babe, as fun as this has been, I gotta get going. So be a good little girl, and move.”
Adrian spoke down to Luna.
“I’m not a good little girl. So I ain’t going anywhere.” Her tone was firm. However Adrian had taken her by surprise, striking her with the back of his hand. And now she was angry.

Adrian smirked at Luna’s shocked expression, but then that smirk turned to confusion.
She was calm as she struck him back. Adrian’s face held surprise, as he put a hand to his red cheek.
“Oh Adrian, poor, stupid, Adrian. You thought you could strike me, and I’d just cower away like I use to? HA! Boy, were you wrong!” She pulled him up by his shirt colar, planting him in the chair where he was before.
“I no longer want to know why you were gonna bury Snapdragon alive. You broke his spirit, so he was no longer of any use to you. Snapdragon is no longer yours. As of now, he belongs with Violet, whom belongs to me.” Luna said confidently. Violet and Snapdragon silently rejoicing, as they hug one another.

After Jhon and the boys dragged Adrian back to his car, they all celebrated on Snapdragon and Violet’s reuniting. Luna had never seen violet cry so much from pure joy. Luna had officially adopted Snapdragon as Violet’s special friend. Snapdragon was happy to be with Violet again, and to have a new, better owner. He still had some things to work out though, but Violet would be there to help.
Untill then, violet introduced Snapdragon to the farm fluffs. Everyone was having a wonderful time, even Luna. Violet and Snapdragon danced the night away, until they had to leave. Snapdragon and Violet fell asleep together on the drive home.

Luna picked up the two tuckered out fluffs, and brought them inside. Setting them in the saferoom.

(End)

(Okay so… i hope this one is more tame, i realized the metal pan may have been a bit much. I hope you enjoyed the story!)

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There’s something really funny about this guy getting beaten unconscious with a blunt object (twice!) and then thinking he’d have the upper hand by giving his assailant a single slap. Not even a punch, a slap. I think all those concussions might have given him brain damage.

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That guy would not be getting up and talking after being knocked unconscious by a hit to the head.

The violence in this story switches from cartoon slapstick to a simple slapfight and it’s a bit odd, I can’t lie.

I also wish we got more details about the fluffies and their feelings on this throughout- their happy reunion was cute, but I as a reader would have liked to know more about how they reacted to the fighting, what their actions and feelings were in the face of violence and anger.

While you don’t want your human characters to be faceless automatons, you also don’t want your fluffies to just be voiceless, thoughtless background pieces in some human’s personal adventures. Stories here are about fluffies primarily; human drama should come second (unless that human’s actual source of drama is fluffies.)

Now, don’t despair. You haven’t fully done that here. It’s an easy trap to fall into though, and I want you to be aware of it.

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