Test Comic Voiceover 1 (SpaceFluff)

Oh god oh god
Please I need feedback

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Fluffy is a bit too high pitched but that’s just my opinion. Other than that it sounds good.

Edit:

to clarify, after watching this two more times, fluffies voice only sounds too high pitched at the last part of it’s dialogue. The beginning ( especially the first part) sounds kinda cute and very fitting for a fluffy.

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Thank you for the feedback! I’ll use this advice in the future!

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The screen shake is a bit excessive.

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Got it! Will keep in mind for next time! <3

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Screen shake, the digital “gargle” noise, and the fluffy is too chipmunk-ish and fast.

Easy for you to fix. You’re 75% of the way there.

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Pitch is a tad too high but other than that seems good to me.

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Thank you for the imput! I’ll make some changes! <3

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Understood, thank you!

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Oh hell yeah :smiley: