In a serene meadow bathed in the soft glow of the morning sun, Taffy and Daisy lay side by side, surrounded by a meadow of wildflowers. The gentle breeze carried the sweet scent of blossoms, creating a peaceful haven for the two friends.
Taffy turned to Daisy, her eyes filled with a mix of curiosity and sadness. “why du peopwe awways want tu huwt us?” The Filly asked, her voice barely above a whisper.
Daisy sighed, her gaze fixed on the sky. “i don’t knu, taffeh. Peopwe just have su much hatwed in theiw heawts.”
Taffy frowned, her brow furrowing in thought. “but why du peopwe have hatwed in theiw heawts?”
Daisy paused, recalling her mother’s words. “i don’t knu, mah Mummah towd Daiseh some humans awe bown eviw, an’ some choose tu be eviw because it makes them happeh instead of sad. Dwey feed off da enewgeh of othews.”
Taffy shivered at the thought"that’s scaweh. Du yu think we get huwt?"
Daisy turned to Taffy, her expression resolute. “i’II nevew wet anybodeh huwt yu, taffeh.”
With that promise, Taffy hugged Daisy tightly, finding comfort in her friend’s fluffy support.
The absolute best case scenario here is that this is AI written because if it wasnt then you have the most bland faggoty writing style ever put to fucking paper and I’d very gladly subscribe to you to tell you to leave this site underneath every post or comment you ever leave here.
So get the fuck out there’s already plenty of untalented groids here we dont need one trying to submit AI slop as real writing.
The staggering lack of creativity displayed by your generation is a festering rot enhanced endlessly by the advancement of AI. You will never progress as a creative unless you stop using AI as a crutch. AI as a creative tool should be used for suggestions. In creating a custom campaign for my Pathfinder group I have found AI is an excellent tool for creating names and offering new perspectives. But never stoop so low as to let it write your stories or paint your pictures for you.
This isn’t all insult. This is advice. You will never be anybody because you aren’t choosing to be. Now fuck off and grow up a bit before you come back. Child prodigy is a stereotype and a lazy one you’ll never live up to. I’m not your dad and I refuse to give you further validation.
AI for writing? No thanks. I rather read the vast library of NobodyAtAll in one sitting, but at least his shit got a actual storyline, actual fluffspeak and actual humor.
A’right, for yer next story, don’t use a translator, do some research here on FC, Latest FCwiki topics - FluffyCommunity, read some other stories to get the hang of it, a fluffy doesn’t use ‘I’ as in me, but it calls itself fluffy, so; ‘I don’t knu’ becomes ‘Fluffeh nu know’ for example.
Prove em wrong, let 'em know yer ain’t an ai using bot
This text doesn’t have “you” in it. No style at all. I am 100% sure it’s AI generated, but even if it isn’t, it looks like generated. And it’s certainly not a compliment, but a thing to work on, because you haven’t developed your style yet.
P.S. if you want detailed critique on what’s wrong with that particular text and what probably make people think it’s AI, let me know.
If you could explain in detail what wrong with the particular text and what makes people think it’s AI like you said that would be greatly appreciate @Flufferinie
Okay then.
There are two major things. Your story doesn’t have a plot. Your story doesn’t have characters.
No plot.
Your story has the word “adventure” in the title and it’s very misleading. Adventure means there’s going to be some action, some hardships, which your heroes need to overcome to get to their well-deserved happy ending. Story without a conflict can exist, but not in the case when you call it an adventure. Here we have two fluffies speaking about generalised good and evil. I don’t even want to explain why fluffies have no grasp of such complex concepts. It shows that you are not very experienced with fluffies as characters (or that it was generated). But.
No characters.
Daisy and Taffy, you say? Who are they? I don’t even see these characters described. Color of their fur. Their manes. Do they have some wounds or injuries (considering they discuss evil humans who want to hurt them - why?)
I have no image of them. They speak in the same fancy non-fluffy language. They don’t have personalities. They don’t have an appearance. You can easily put literally anyone in this text and have the same output. These two being fluffies doesn’t define the story. Because there is no story and there are no characters.
If you want to become better with writing fluffy-related stories, read some on FC. There are plenty of great writers, great stories and amazing characters. Current 2024 nominations have some community-favourite ones and you can start from these.
But as for now - the generalised emptiness you have here really stinks AI.
Yes, it’s YAKA situation - Yet Another Keeper Alt. “I’m not using AI, I’m just autistic”, yeah we’ve noticed. Writing’s robotic and soul-less, and everybody can sniff your autism from a mile away.
I hadn’t realized you were Keeper. I think this is the first time I’ve had the displeasure. I agree with the homie. You’re a fat unloved nigger who needs to get a fucking clue and fuck off for good. There will be no improvement for you. If you haven’t figured out after all this time how to obscure an alt then you’ll never learn your lesson.
We don’t want you here. We don’t want your trash on the site. The worst artist I can think of on this site is miles better than you because they’re trying. Your AI garbage may pass in school because none of your teachers have given a shit to care since no child left behind. But that shit won’t fly here, and neither will your negative opsec.
