‘’ SCREEEE, NU WAN MOWE HUWTIES!.. DADDEH PWEASE!!!..‘’ The little Foal Screamed in Pain as The large needle pierced Their Fluff. You are David, A Scientist for Hasbio Corporation That Got Promoted For “Excellent Work In your Research Branch”. This Job Was Boring, But If it Meant Extra Pay And Dealing With this Plague, It was a Sweet deal. ’ ’ If you shut up Your Whining, It Won’t hurt… ’ ’ You say. ’ ’ Why Daddeh Meanie… Am Onwy Made for Huggies an’ Wuv… ‘’
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This Is my First Draft for The Fluffy Exam Series.
You’re gonna want to post more than a paragraph at a time. I hope you have a good idea for this story.
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Yes, I do. This Will Continue More In-Depth When I Review It. Please Give Any Comments To Improve The Story.
There is nothing to comment on because it’s literally one paragraph. Take that shit back to reddit.
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Stop using Grammarly as a crutch would also be a good start.
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Making it into something people could read would help
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Redditfag having to go through comment history to get an insult
Okay bro lmao. Keep crying like the miserable little kike you are.
Tf Is a Kike you british or Sum?
Bro is Literally Telling I’m from reddit When You can’t Spell💀
And What the Fuck Is a Cascadian Libertarian🤔
Dude, not even the kikes want this 10yo booger eater.
Love,
The local kike
Dear child, have you ever learned how to use punctuation and capitalization? If so for the love of god and all that is holy, fucking USE IT.
And post more than a goddamn paragraph.
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Yes, I guess Using a Phone Is Dookie ass
I use a phone, no excuses. Git gud get LMAObox.
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I use one, and I have no difficulty in demonstrating proper grammar, capitalisation, and punctuation.
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