The Fourth of July Part 1 by Karn

Thanks. I’m rather proud of it.

You should be. There’s a LOT of moving parts to it with so many fluffies, each fairly fleshed out and with a developed character. While a couple of them were summarily culled, you did a really good job keeping all those plates spinning, keeping each of them present throughout the story, and weaving them back into one another at the end.

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True, some fluffies had to be killed off for story purposes.
Wanted it to be clear that when things didn’t go as planned that Seth got irrationally upset about it. It let people wonder who was and wasn’t going to make it while also showing that Seth was unhinged.

And if you liked the series, you might want to check this out. I had P3 do the art.

This :point_up:

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