The hated foal, a story by Finnie

Mummah gave birth to pretty babbehs but you were a people babbeh not pretty, Mummah was so happy she looked at the foals, until mummah said “Gasps N-n-NU! Mummah hate ugwy poopie babbeh!” She slapped you with her hooves, booboo juice was leaking out of your nose, you were sobbing and you were saying to mummah “M-mummah… Babbeh wuv u” And she was angry at you and she said “NU CAWE! HATE STOOPID BABBEH!” She slapped you 2 times, poked your eye, it was very painful you were screaming and crying that Mummah hurted you. Mummah’s spechaw fweind was back to give mummies to mummah for milkies, so she can feed her babies. “Tank u fow gib mummies fow babbehs! Wuv u spechaw fweind u am bestest!” You looked at Daddeh and Daddeh said “Hm? Wai am u huwt? Did mummah huwt u?” Daddeh said, and you felt nervous to tell, if you told Daddeh what happened, Mummah could’ve have hurt you for telling Daddeh. Daddeh went to mummah and he said “Hey spechaw fweind, Wai am poopie babbeh huwt? Teww the twurth” Mummah was so scared that her spechaw fweind would leave her, she said nervously “Uhhhh Nu Mawe nu huwt poopie babbeh, poopie babbeh feww and Mawe gib Huggies and wuv tu poopie babbeh dat gut huwt!” The Lilac and mint filly was done drinking all mummah’s milkies and she said to Daddeh “Dat am a wie! Mummah did nowt gib Huggies and wuv tu poopie babbeh wet meh teww da twuth!” She told the truth about what happend and the second foal was a Sky blue and cyan Pegasus, when he was done sucking milkies from mummah, he gasped, tears was in his eyes, because mummah was rude, Your brother said “WAT?! MUMMAH WAI JUS’ WHY DID U HUWT GUD POOPIE BABBEH?! U AM NU BESTEST MUMMAH NU MORE!!” Mummah was sobbing her two bestest babbehs were now gone and they hated her and she said “SEE POOPIE BABBEH, DIS AM AWW UR FAUWT! MUMMAH HATECHU! HATECHU!” You were sobbing, and your brother and your sister hugged you and they were comforting you, Daddeh gasped and he said “DAT’S IT, WE AM WEAVING FIND NYU SPECHAW FWEIND GU WAY NAO!” Mummah was sobbing and she said aggressively “FINE! HATE POOPIE BABBEH!” Mummah and Daddeh were arguing and you were scared but you still have your siblings to comfort you Your sister said “Shh it am otay, u am gud poopie brother, du not wisten tu mummah” And your brother said “I agwee wit sistah, u am spechaw nu am dummeh" You were happy and you said “Sobs T-tank u Bwuda an’ Sistah u am bestest” And then Daddeh said “Cum on babbehs, Wets gu su we can hav a wawmsie housies an’ we can hav skittles” Daddeh puts you and your siblings on his back, one by one. He was walking until he was taken to the shelter by the nice lady. She said “Hi there fluffy! Were is your special friend?” He said “Spechaw fweind am in da awwyway spechaw fweind was bein meanie tu poopie babbeh an’ she huwt poopie babbeh” And she replied, “Oh I see okay lemme get your special friend” Mummah was picked up by the nice lady. She said “Ooo! Am wady gonna be nyu mummah? Giv sketties?” She said “No fluffy, I am taking you to the shelter, I bet you like it there,” Mummah replied “Oh Otay”. She took you in your cages, it was very colourful and warm there was toys, You were taken by the nice lady to get all clean, she put a bandaid towel on your eye that got hurt and you said “Tank u fow help babbeh” And the nice lady replied “Aww sweetie no problem I will put you with your Daddy and your nice siblings while your mommy stays alone!” She puts you in a room that is very bright and colourful with all the toysies. You gasp because the room was too beautiful. One day someone was walking in the shelter and she saw you, your siblings and your Daddy and you realised you had a new Mummah! She said “Oh hey there, I will take you home because you seem so nice I will be your new mummah!” You gasped so happily and you sobbed, because you wished that you had nice parents, warm home and all the mummies. She picked you up and she has taken you home, You, your nice siblings and your Daddeh costs $10 And meanie Mummah costed $5, She adopted all of you, except Meanie mummah. Your new mummah gave you names

“Okay light brown and caramel orange fits good, I will call you Sweet Caramel”

Second she named your sissy

“And then you filly, Your name is Bella”

Then she named your brother

“Your name is Flashy, nice wings!”

She named your Daddy

“Alright your Tom”

Then All of you have names, unfortunately the new mommy didn’t adopt your meanie mummah because she was rude to you, Your nice mommy said “Alright let me give you spaghetti for a celebration, yeah?” You were happy and excited that mommy will give you spaghetti. Then she put on fluff tv for your siblings and you. When your mommy was done making the spaghetti, She gave it to all of you and you happily slurped the spaghetti and thought “𝐷𝑖𝑠 𝑎𝑚 𝑑𝑎 𝑏𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑠𝑡 𝑑𝑎𝑦 𝐸𝐵𝐴𝐻! 𝑆𝑤𝑒𝑒𝑡𝑖𝑒 𝐶𝑎𝑤𝑎𝑚𝑒𝑤 𝑔𝑒𝑡 𝑡𝑢 𝑤𝑎𝑡𝑐ℎ 𝑓𝑤𝑢𝑓𝑓 𝑡𝑒𝑒𝑣𝑒𝑒, ℎ𝑎𝑣 𝑛𝑦𝑢 𝑤𝑎𝑟𝑚𝑠𝑖𝑒 ℎ𝑜𝑢𝑠𝑖𝑒 𝑎𝑛 ℎ𝑎𝑣 𝑠𝑘𝑒𝑡𝑡𝑖𝑒𝑠!” Your Daddy and your siblings were very nice and they didn’t poop on the floor, they poop in the litterbox, Daddeh said to all of you “Aww of u am bestest! And u Sweetie Cawamew, U am jus spechaw as da way u awe!”

You had so much fun with your human Mommy, Your Daddeh and your siblings

I’m not saying this to dump on you, but this really needs to he in paragraphs. It’s one big block of text and it’s too hard to read.

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gg no re
get out you little shit

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Newborns can’t talk.

And you wont be able to fix this till the next decade hahaha

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Also this is a story with no images, i should be posted in the Fluffy Text Self-Posting category instead

That’s your concern?

Well everyone else covered most of the rest of it

damn i missed the show