My first fully-original piece of art in a long time. Doing that edit a couple days ago got me really motivated to pick up art again. Paint is my tool of choice.
I’m open to constructive criticism, thoughts, etc. in the comments.
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Well then I reckon don’t eat them then, huh?
Honestly though I’m not really an ideal choice to give any advice on art. I’m definitely excited to see what you’ll draw up though 
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Art is pretty good. Not a lot going on though. Hope to see more in the future
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I thought about adding more but by the time I decided to color/finish it I’d done the linework and felt lazy. This was originally just me dicking around for practice. I’ll keep that in mind though for when I work on more ambitious shots!
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Great use of perspective, but whenever you have something being talked about, put it in the first plane together with the speaker for emphasis.
Other than that, looks pretty solid, keep up the awesome work!
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my only complaint is that no one is kicking that fluffy
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I recent started using actual typed font for my stuff (even sound effects which I used to write myself), and I would recommend it, even if it looks kinda bland. It’s better than handwritten by a mile (easier to read for starters). You are also missing some minor details, like nostrils, inner ears, etc. Lastly, paint supports using a stylus, so maybe consider grabbing a cheap one, or switching to paper and pencil so you can have better control over things like shading around edges, etc. Drawing in paint with a mouse is tedious and will burn you out fast (I did it for years as a kid). Even a free app on a smart phone with a stylus would be better. Otherwise it looks good and I respect you taking the time to improve your art!
Sweet, more art ! I agree with Ace, a little more detail will go a long way. Some indentations/wavering in the lines on the buildings would show that they’re made of brick, for example. Some cracks in the sidewalk, some weeds poking out, a little more trash/litter, would make it feel more like a completed scene.
Perspective is a little wonky but I can tell what you were trying to do, so I can only say keep at it. Vanishing points are tricky but with the way things are viewed here, your fluffy is either really big or this alley is oddly narrow.
About the fluffy- I like your cute cartoony style. I want to flick his nose. I can easily see this fluffy waddling about on his stumpy legs, good start back
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Bet that Fluffy had some pineapple pizza or sum.
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He ate chewed gum and now it’s gonna stay in his stomach for seven years.
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Really useful stuff here, thanks! I’ll keep these in mind for my next works
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