I love the real ending and the other one you where really compelling in this tale
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I’m glad you enjoyed it 
I hoped you like the bit where Millie and the lady react to Uphie’s delusional mindset. It’s not exactly in line with your request, but it was the farthest I could go without seeming forced
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It’s funny because I originally didn’t intend for Uphie to be this bad, but as I progressed more and more, it just became natural to make Uphie more and more unlikable. I hope you’ll remember Uphie as one of the worst Fluffies ever
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I tried to make both endings just as compelling, so it was an enjoyable experience depending on what one voted. I hoped you enjoyed the journey as a whole.
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i feel like a certain kind of person wants children not bc they think it’s a privilege to have that kind of responsibility, or even bc they see it as a responsibility at all, but bc they see it as a means of getting some kind of unspoken personal benefit that most people would find horrifying. i think people like this, and uphie, will do just about anything to get a child (eg: women that kidnap infants) bc they feel they deserve that something more than anyone else, and that by achieving it, you can’t deny that they have earned it. bc they do see it as earned or achieved, never stolen.
point being, if uphie couldn’t get pregnant, she would have stolen prie and veve from the remnants of her herd while they were being slaughtered by animals. hell she probably would’ve triggered that on purpose specifically to do so. and then insisted she has no idea why wolves were there and that she had a special friend and gave birth. like fr
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Agreed. The current Uphie is definitely one who does not see foals as a responsibility. They are an accessory / tool to make her look like a good mummah and she doesn’t really care for her foals. Even Gwent is just a tool for her technically to make herself look good.
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I sooo would have loved to have Uphie witness grown up Veve and Gwent having special huggies and their own foals
Just for you (An alternate timeline)
Uphie stared out from her corner in the safe room, unable to move. She hated this. She hated that Munstah daddeh and Munstah Gwem mummah had taken her weggies, but she hated what she was seeing even more.
Her beloved Gwent was nuzzling that twick munstah Gweenie Wewe. HER Gwent and what was worst was that Gwent was giving dummeh twick munstah Gweenie Wewe, specaw huggies. Those specaw huggies were supposed to be for her
“GWENT AM UWPEE SPECAW FWEN!” Uphie tried to scream.
Unfortunately, she could not say anything. Munstah daddeh and Munstah Gwem mummah had taken her tawkie pwace as well, and all she could do was watch. Watch as wawa fell from her see place, as her Gwent gave specaw huggies to twick munstah Gweenie Wewe.
She hated it. This horrifying sight of the twick munstah Wewe steawin specaw huggies from her beloved Gwent. This was not fair! It was so not fair! Those specaw huggies were supposed to be for her, so that she could make the bestest babbehs ever. A bunch of cute pink and black pointy Fluffies who all looked like Sanny and Gwent.
She could still remember that darkie time where she could have given twick munstah Gweenie Wewe foebah sweepies. She should have num Gweenie Wewe. She didn’t because she was a Good Fluffy and this was what she got in return!? She should have given Gweenie Wewe foebah sweepies and now she knew her mistake.
Once her weggies came back, she knew what to do. She would give twick munstah Gweenie Wewe the worstest hurties ebah and then foebah sweepies, then she would have Gwent give her specaw huggies. She just needed to wait. Wait and endure for her weggies to come back. Unfortunately they never would, and Uphie would spend the remainder of her life as a doll on the corner of the safe room, watching as Wewebecame a soon-mummah, and then had babbehs, and watched the happy life of Gwent, Veve and their many babbehs.
Eventually Uphie realized her weggies would never come back and she only had two words left to say: Wan Die
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Aww you spoil me.
Thank you!
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Finally finished the story it truly is the most peakest fluffy content ever. I do wonder hypothetically how would Gwent actually react to Uphie wanting her as a special friend?
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Honestly, I think confusion then flattery, because he wouldn’t understand the concept of grooming, so to him it was just the Fluffy who he once saw as a mummah, becoming a normal Fluffy when he became an adult, and now this Fluffy wanted specaw huggies with him. Of course, whether he actually has an interest in Uphie in that way is a different matter.
Also I’m curious if you read SBS Sibling Experiment.
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Yeah I did, I find it very fascinating.
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This is obviously the better ending but the other does have the more realistic action by Uphie, no way that utter bitch would be able to show restrain
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Very true. Veve only managed to survive thanks to stupidity on Uphie’s part
Can someone summarize this story? I don’t have the patience to read all of it, no offense to the writer, it’s just I don’t have a long attention span
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First of all, congrats on making it to the end of the story- all too many fluffy stories wind up without an ending so actually making one this long and involved have an ending is worth kudos on its own. And the ending was actually satisfying! The humans realizing that they had issues that the fluffies were using to get their way, and fixing the issues WHILE also ridding themselves of the problem fluffies, is a rare way to go.
I also have to thank you for the tab format to allow us to follow- or not- the fate of all the involved fluffies. I really wanted to focus on Uphie til the end but I did also want to see what happened to Prie and Veve. That made it a lot easier to avoid interrupting the flow.
Also good job on Millie for realizing the potential of that recording of Uphie wanting to murder Veve and raise Gwent for her own babbeh/eventual spechul friend (ew.). It was a nasty temptation that she had the good sense to realize she needed to get rid of so it wasn’t there waiting to be used when she could potentially hit a low point. Even I was wanting to see the reactions of everyone finding out what Uphie really was like. But that would just hurt everyone’s relationships and not end well for Millie. And in the end, we all really just wanted to see Uphie suffer and Prie to die knowing how worthless of a fluffy she truly was.
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Summary.
Uphie is a runaway. The spoiled kind who came from a nice home and ran away because her owner refused to let her have foals.
She came back eight months later with two foals. She expected to be welcome with open arms, unaware of the mental distress her actions had caused on her owner.
Her owner wants revenge, but not in a typical fashion. She wants Uphie to know how badly she messed up. Like understand how much she did for Uphie and how stupid it was for Uphie to throw it all away, so she makes Uphie work so to speak.
Pull a wagon, to earn coins and then use to pay for food and rent. It doesn’t work out and Uphie ends up breaking her legs.
Her owner goes crazy trying to still make this work somehow. Uphie’s foals get involved. Joining shows as “working” under Uphie’s stead.
Uphie’s bestest: Prie, is a ruthless hell gremlin who makes it big in a Fluffy blood sport TV show called Tally’s Playground.
Uphie’s other foal: Veve, stars in an online Hugbox series called: Skettiland Rangers, based off the power rangers, where she is a villain alongside two other Fluffies called Gwent and Nelio, from my SBS experiement series.
Uphie’s owner gets more and more unstable as her desire for revenge begins to consume her, and people around her get hurt.
It ends with Uphie’s owner finally realizing that revenge wasn’t worth it, and simply giving up on Uphie. Leading to this ending.
It’s the best summary I could come up honestly, but like it really doesn’t capture the whole essence of the characters and stuff.
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Oh okay, thank you!
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Thank you for the high praise 
I am really glad you liked the story, especially the ending. I was really worried it wouldn’t match the expectations of the readers, but it seemed to be well received. I am curious on what you felt about the fake ending.