FGfaR Chapter 6: All's Right in Spaghettiville/Poopah's Song (By alphamule)

Pippa's Song by Robert Browning - Your Daily Poem This one is totally random but the title wrote itself. Result of random googling of book titles starting with All’s Right. Oddly, there’s this novel: https://www.wheelers.co.nz/books/9780062962485-alls-right-with-the-world/ I guess given some author’s canon for how fluffy ponies see the world, this would be horribly appropriate to parody.
Original:

The year’s at the spring,
And day’s at the morn;
Morning’s at seven;
The hill-side’s dew-pearl’d;
The lark’s on the wing;
The snail’s on the thorn;
God’s in His heaven,
All’s right with the world!

My version:

The year’s at the warm,
And day’s at the morn;
Morning is more milkies time;
The hugpile’s a-daww’d;
The birdy friend’s on the wing;
The green foal’s on the lawn;
But not for long,
All’s wrong for Poopah!

Meh, think someone else could do better.

If I ever did a comic of this, it would probably go that ironically, it’s alright for the baby in the poop pile, but the bestest baby on her back on the other hand… Bwrdee fwend, nuuuuuuuu! Bwing bestest back! But that would be abuse fic and done to death. >:)

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